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Still infected with your sweet poison,
I linger on the shore watching the horizon,
With the ghost of your memory in my head,
I can’t conceive the idea that you are now dead

You came in my life with all your confidence,
And kissed away my dull emptiness,
You’ve breached the walls of my defences,
And took possession on all of my senses

For you I lowered my guard,
And lead you straight to my heart,
For your intoxicating love I became addicted,
How was I to know that our time would be so restricted?

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Still addicted

Contributed by Necromant on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 09:15:02 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Still infected with your sweet poison,
I linger on the shore watching the horizon,
With the ghost of your memory in my head,
I can’t conceive the idea that you are now dead

You came in my life with all your confidence,
And kissed away my dull emptiness,
You’ve breached the walls of my defences,
And took possession on all of my senses

For you I lowered my guard,
And lead you straight to my heart,
For your intoxicating love I became addicted,
How was I to know that our time would be so restricted?

Copyright Â© Necromant ... [ 2004-01-12 09:15:02]
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Re: Still addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 09:17:42 AM AEST
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Oh Anne..this is so beautifully touching....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Still addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 10:05:46 AM AEST
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Beautifully touching. Goes to show you we got to live for the time we have.

Re: Still addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 10:51:06 AM AEST
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A good write and one I can relate to.
Well done
Larry

Re: Still addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:42:42 PM AEST
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wow, you must have alot of feelings for this person, congratulations on such a wonderful write

Alec Fernandez

(My poetry sucks)

Re: Still addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by Manicmuze on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:23:57 PM AEST
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We have to take those chances of letting our guard down in order to really experience the joys that life has to offer i think.

I found this very sad, real and full of emotion. A strong write, I enjoyed this, nicely done.
~ Wendy

Thanks for the warm welcome :)

Re: Still addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by mystERA on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:03:08 PM AEST
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vera nice!!

i imagine this poem being a song.....a sad, slow song. With weeping violins in the background :)

what d'you think?

ellie

Re: Still addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by jeanie on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 05:25:06 PM AEST
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yeah, sad and touching really deep inside....I'm sorry for your sorrow

jeanie

Re: Still addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by kori31 on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 06:36:03 PM AEST
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awesome....hit me right in the heart reminding me of an ex who passed away...

Re: Still addicted (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 11:40:24 AM AEST
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Awsome!!!!! Heart shattering! Oh my this is so close home! Very well written. Blessed be
Claire

Re: Still addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:20:13 PM AEST
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mmm this poem hits home hard... beautifully written, hugs n' love nessa

Re: Still addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:12:39 PM AEST
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written with lots of emotion an enjoyable read.

wildej.

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