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Array ( [sid] => 31457 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Cold [time] => 2004-01-12 08:47:41 [hometext] => Just missing someone from the past [bodytext] => It's cold, the starlit clear sky,
The chill silence across the fields,
Days are short, soon the dark,
Winter brings no joy at all.

I stop for a second, no reason,
The mind drifts back and forth,
To times when it was really hot,
Perhaps I smiled then, not now.

Where are you now, at this time,
Who are you with and why not me,
What was it that I did wrong,
Why did you say goodbye?

You are now my winter,
Cold, distant, a frown, no joy,
But you were once the summer sun,
And we talked and danced as one.

Not a word, nothing you say,
Am I not even seen as a friend,
It's cold whatever the weather,
No you, thus winter the year long. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jonteD [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The Cold

Contributed by jonteD on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:47:41 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It's cold, the starlit clear sky,
The chill silence across the fields,
Days are short, soon the dark,
Winter brings no joy at all.

I stop for a second, no reason,
The mind drifts back and forth,
To times when it was really hot,
Perhaps I smiled then, not now.

Where are you now, at this time,
Who are you with and why not me,
What was it that I did wrong,
Why did you say goodbye?

You are now my winter,
Cold, distant, a frown, no joy,
But you were once the summer sun,
And we talked and danced as one.

Not a word, nothing you say,
Am I not even seen as a friend,
It's cold whatever the weather,
No you, thus winter the year long.

Copyright © jonteD ... [ 2004-01-12 08:47:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:57:33 AM AEST
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Awww this is so sad..but so beautifully written...
Hugs from someone in your future...
Little Lady...

Re: The Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 09:13:11 AM AEST
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Oh so sad!! But beautifully written!! Keep on writing!! Very vivid imagery!

Anne

Re: The Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Manicmuze on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:20:42 PM AEST
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This is painfully sad and full of emotion. Full of heartache and longing.

Very real emotion expressed here, has universal appeal... i think we can all relate.
Nicely done, enjoyed this,
~ Wendy

Re: The Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:19:18 PM AEST
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I felt your poem clear to my toes. Very moving. Wonderful poem.

Kie

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