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Array ( [sid] => 31449 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Perfect World [time] => 2004-01-12 06:30:03 [hometext] => With all the war and tragedy going on nowadays, this is just how I feel. [bodytext] => I just close my mind
To the things I see
For with no thought
There's nothing to believe

No starving
No hate
No death to come
I'm living in world filled with love

My eyes are wide shut
And that's how they'll stay
For in my own world
Nothing will change

There's laughing
And loving
And all tears are of joy
No races
No sexes
We're all part of the story

If I am blind, I am free
Of this world of pain
So stitch them closed
And just let me be sane

Because in this day of war and hate
We all grow into a festering sore
But when I turn my back on it all
I'll have my own perfect world [comments] => 2 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lostinlimbo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Perfect World

Contributed by lostinlimbo on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:30:03 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I just close my mind
To the things I see
For with no thought
There's nothing to believe

No starving
No hate
No death to come
I'm living in world filled with love

My eyes are wide shut
And that's how they'll stay
For in my own world
Nothing will change

There's laughing
And loving
And all tears are of joy
No races
No sexes
We're all part of the story

If I am blind, I am free
Of this world of pain
So stitch them closed
And just let me be sane

Because in this day of war and hate
We all grow into a festering sore
But when I turn my back on it all
I'll have my own perfect world

Copyright © lostinlimbo ... [ 2004-01-12 06:30:03]
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Re: Perfect World (User Rating: 1 )
by 13Hopes on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 07:14:34 AM AEST
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Poetry is such a wonderfull canvass to paint our thoughts and emotions upon...
Good write

Cheers
#13

Re: Perfect World (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 07:36:29 AM AEST
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So true! Very good described!
Unfortunately we can't keep our eyes shut,
Eventually we'll have to open them,
.........and probably get shot
(i know its stupid but...:p)
Continue writing great talent!

Anne

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