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[aid] => mick
[title] => Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest
[time] => 2004-01-12 01:03:36
[hometext] =>
[bodytext] => If she didn't make it - they would never know,
Never to be known - her stream would never flow,
No legacy left behind - cause she didn't grow,
An early death - All forgotten and nothing to show.
Shes here - Shes now - Shes all go.
Suicide, for attention - for nothing.
She made the wrong decision.
Never could take it - but could take the pill,
She struggles to make it - but shes had her fill,
Her parents wont believe -they dont think its real,
Keeping pain silent - she thinks she wont feel,
She'll swallow. She'll slice. She'll suffice.
Suicide, for attention - for nothing.
She made the wrong decision.
All alone - she thinks noone sees,
How much it hurts - neglected mental fees,
The universe so large - how pointless she seems,
she'll slit her wrists - forcing her own peace,
Shes there. Shes scared. Shes beyond repair.
Suicide, for attention - for nothing.
She made the wrong decision.
She can't do it - Cause she does beleive,
She wont do it - when she finds relief,
She hasn't done it - cause she can achieve,
Her sanity totters - Murmured heart on a sleave,
She can't. She wont'. She hasn't.
Suicide, for attention - for nothing.
Shes making the RIGHT decision.
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Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest
Contributed by
spiffyphil
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:03:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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If she didn't make it - they would never know,
Never to be known - her stream would never flow,
No legacy left behind - cause she didn't grow,
An early death - All forgotten and nothing to show.
Shes here - Shes now - Shes all go.
Suicide, for attention - for nothing.
She made the wrong decision.
Never could take it - but could take the pill,
She struggles to make it - but shes had her fill,
Her parents wont believe -they dont think its real,
Keeping pain silent - she thinks she wont feel,
She'll swallow. She'll slice. She'll suffice.
Suicide, for attention - for nothing.
She made the wrong decision.
All alone - she thinks noone sees,
How much it hurts - neglected mental fees,
The universe so large - how pointless she seems,
she'll slit her wrists - forcing her own peace,
Shes there. Shes scared. Shes beyond repair.
Suicide, for attention - for nothing.
She made the wrong decision.
She can't do it - Cause she does beleive,
She wont do it - when she finds relief,
She hasn't done it - cause she can achieve,
Her sanity totters - Murmured heart on a sleave,
She can't. She wont'. She hasn't.
Suicide, for attention - for nothing.
Shes making the RIGHT decision.
Copyright ©
spiffyphil
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2004-01-12 01:03:36]
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Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest
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by spiffyphil on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:42:08 AM AEST
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| I wrote this poem with the intention of turning it into a song. It was a peice of therapy for a girl who constantly contemplated suicide. It is sad to say that I had found out she commited suicide just recently. I never met her. |
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Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 07:26:14 AM AEST
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| It is beautiful.....Im proud of you.I also want to say there wasnt anything you could had said or done for her.she had already made up here mind.you were a good friend to be there to talk with her.take care.sandy |
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Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 02:01:37 PM AEST
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This is so damn beautiful.. im so sorry about the girl.. at least she's at peace now..
x_x_x |
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Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest
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by waos on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 01:56:01 AM AEST
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| its good |
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Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest
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by mercedes on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:12:48 AM AEST
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| Very rarely do i read a poem that seriously touches me to the point of causing tears. I am like that girl, and have met a poet on here that watches over me. Without him, i think i would of attempted suicide a second time already. Im sure she appreciated your support but sometimes its not always enough. |
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Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest
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by imlostbutloved69 on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:23:08 PM AEST
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| I'm the girl you wrote this poem to, seriously! I AM HERE! I AM ALIVE! It's been nearly 4 months since I've looked at this poem and I found it today and I cried. I'm sorry I made you think I was dead, but here I am, I'm alive and real. And you still have a chance to meet me, I'm not giving up! I intend on living this hell to the fullest. My friends have picked me up, turned my face toward the sky and dragged from darkness into light! |
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Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest
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by darkfairy1188 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:00:48 PM AEST
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depending on the person's situation, sometimes death can be make a person happier than living can....
good job. keep writin.
~Sara |
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Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest
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by Katie2008 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 09:54:51 PM AEST
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This is a truely amazing piece. I can totally relate. Thank you for telling me to check it out. I agree with Sara, depending on the situation. I wonder what death brings? Is it better than what a twisted life has to offer? I'm very sorry to hear that the girl actually did end up killing herself. Best of luck.
Katie |
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