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[title] => our final words
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[bodytext] => in the rain we stood no words left to say communicate with eyes things better left unsaid and you tried you tried so hard to make your eyes look sad but i could see the happiness i could feel your relief the best thing that could have happened for you you tried to touch me to put your hand on my cheek but naturally you couldn't we both laughed awkwardly and just stood there i broke the silence whispering into your mind, "it's ok to be happy it's ok to move on i understand completely" you feigned a look of shock then blushed when i didn't buy it your eyes found the ground i would have touched your chin lifted your shining face if i could i whispered again, "i want to hug you so badly just touch you once more" in your mind, my voice was shaking our eyes met again and i saw a tear a real tear slowly descend your cheek goddamn you don't know how bad i wanted to wipe that tear away so hard so hard to let you go but.... "it's time" i said softly "it's time for you to move on and it's time for me to go be happy and remember that i love you no matter what you do i love you" if my heart had still mattered it would have broken when the urge to kiss you one last time arose and all i could do was look at you memorize your face your body the memory of your love "go" i said you kissed your fingertips and clumsily placed them where my lips should have been where my lips would have been if not for..... then you turned away from me and left me to stand alone by the fresh soil of my grave and you you walked away walked away to better things and i i just faded away faded away to Nothing [comments] => 7 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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