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Words imperfect no matter how hard I try
To express and confess my every desire
Every inch and second
I struggle to find what words to say
A million cliche lines will never convey
Keep it simple, keep it straight
Let go of every word and leave it up to fate
Short, simple words without further delay
You make me feel okay
To most okay is nothing to devote
This cause labeled as unworthy to premote
But it goes without saying
I've been praying all my life
To just be "okay"
So this is all I have
This is the revalation I've been waiting for
For you have made me whole again
And I ask of you no more. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 249 [topic] => 25 [informant] => teenageemogirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

You Make Me Feel Okay

Contributed by teenageemogirl on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 10:22:04 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Eyes as blank as an unlit sky
Words imperfect no matter how hard I try
To express and confess my every desire
Every inch and second
I struggle to find what words to say
A million cliche lines will never convey
Keep it simple, keep it straight
Let go of every word and leave it up to fate
Short, simple words without further delay
You make me feel okay
To most okay is nothing to devote
This cause labeled as unworthy to premote
But it goes without saying
I've been praying all my life
To just be "okay"
So this is all I have
This is the revalation I've been waiting for
For you have made me whole again
And I ask of you no more.

Copyright © teenageemogirl ... [ 2004-01-11 22:22:04]
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Re: You Make Me Feel Okay (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 10:44:10 PM AEST
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Beautiful love poem ! Loved your style and texture,very simple yet so rich.Great job!
PumpkinPie

Re: You Make Me Feel Okay (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 11:15:20 PM AEST
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this is a good write.. i enjoyed reading it

peace
JENNA

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