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Array ( [sid] => 31407 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => - Fatal Waltz - [time] => 2004-01-11 19:53:25 [hometext] => I honestly to say, I dont really like this poem very much, I just think I put to much description into it... [bodytext] => A lovely woman of angelic grace steps onto the white marble floor
Her stormy silver eyes scan the ballroom like a cautious bird
The woman wears a dress of perfect white silk
She elegantly steps onto the white floor
All eyes quickly shift to the angelic beauty

A fetching man emerges from the awestricken crowd
He nobly walks up to the woman and takes her delicate, white gloved hand
A sweet smile fills her fair, gleaming face
He exchanges a childish smile with her
They both gracefully step onto the hauntingly deserted floor

They waltz along the floor, which seems to disappear before them
Deep in the black shadows stands a slender man
A look of sheer evil cursed his sinister face
The woman with her striking eyes catches sight of him
His wicked emerald eyes fell upon the charming woman
A shrieking gasp filled the large ballroom

A piercing arrow found the woman’s kind heart
A cataclysm of silken, ruby blood surrounds her lithe body
Menacing, horrible laughter can be heard, filling the deserted air
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Crimson_Rose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
- Fatal Waltz -

Contributed by Crimson_Rose on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 07:53:25 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



A lovely woman of angelic grace steps onto the white marble floor
Her stormy silver eyes scan the ballroom like a cautious bird
The woman wears a dress of perfect white silk
She elegantly steps onto the white floor
All eyes quickly shift to the angelic beauty

A fetching man emerges from the awestricken crowd
He nobly walks up to the woman and takes her delicate, white gloved hand
A sweet smile fills her fair, gleaming face
He exchanges a childish smile with her
They both gracefully step onto the hauntingly deserted floor

They waltz along the floor, which seems to disappear before them
Deep in the black shadows stands a slender man
A look of sheer evil cursed his sinister face
The woman with her striking eyes catches sight of him
His wicked emerald eyes fell upon the charming woman
A shrieking gasp filled the large ballroom

A piercing arrow found the woman’s kind heart
A cataclysm of silken, ruby blood surrounds her lithe body
Menacing, horrible laughter can be heard, filling the deserted air




Copyright © Crimson_Rose ... [ 2004-01-11 19:53:25]
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Re: - Fatal Waltz - (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 11:26:40 PM AEST
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wow very powerful write.,. its gives you an errie feeling.. I really like it alot.. great job

JENNA


Re: - Fatal Waltz - (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:02:38 AM AEST
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its chilling vivid yes now I have goosebumps
michelle


Re: - Fatal Waltz - (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 12:22:49 PM AEST
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I liked this. I don't think it was overly descriptive. I would love to know what brought this on but just as well to keep us guessing. Good write.




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