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Array ( [sid] => 31347 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Message of the Blade [time] => 2004-01-11 03:17:53 [hometext] => This is for anyone who likes vamps. Just imagine if the one you loved was one... [bodytext] => The dark night comes swiftly,
Its painful brightness
Reaches my eyes,
Blinding me
In a thick, heavy cover
Of black.
With silver-edged titanium blade drawn
From her sheath,
I struggle forward.
I see without seeing
The creatures of the night,
Bloodthirsty, murderous
Vampires.
Like the firing of a machine gun,
Footsteps I hear come from behind me.
I twirl my massive sword
As I spin to see,
And bringing it slashing down...
And stop the fatal swing
Of my sword, sharp enough
To slice a baby's hair lengthwise,
Stop it colder than
Absolute zero,
Less than a quarter inch
From her face.
Yes, her.
I step, startled, backwards
And lower
My legendary blade.
A wall is suddenly at my back,
I slowly sink to the bloody street,
Blood I have spilt
From others like her,
But they were not like her.
Still a few miles away,
The others close slowly in.
I begin to shake,
Begin to ask for mercy.
This cannot be!
Not her, not the girl I love,
Please!
But a vampire she is,
Despite my pleas.
I should have known already,
After she drained my heart dry, though
Not realizing, and giving me
Nothing back in return.
The others are here now,
My death is inevitable, I know,
So I lower my head
And wait for it to come.
She brings her head down beside mine,
And I feel a small prick
Of pain in my neck.
Bursts of bright lights
Flash and speed behind
My tightly shut eyes.
I release the handle of my sword
And relax my muscles,
Gradually sliding
Into the World of the Damned.
The lights stop,
I am gone.

Sunlight streams through my window,
Awakening me from my slumber.
I wonder that I am not dead,
Was it nothing more
Than a horrible nightmare?
I draw out my blade,
My night was real,
So says the message, scrawled in blood,
On my sword.
It is from her,
"You have been allowed to live,
It will not be so violent
When next we meet."
Then signed her name. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 43 [informant] => solmyr1404 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
The Message of the Blade

Contributed by solmyr1404 on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 03:17:53 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



The dark night comes swiftly,
Its painful brightness
Reaches my eyes,
Blinding me
In a thick, heavy cover
Of black.
With silver-edged titanium blade drawn
From her sheath,
I struggle forward.
I see without seeing
The creatures of the night,
Bloodthirsty, murderous
Vampires.
Like the firing of a machine gun,
Footsteps I hear come from behind me.
I twirl my massive sword
As I spin to see,
And bringing it slashing down...
And stop the fatal swing
Of my sword, sharp enough
To slice a baby's hair lengthwise,
Stop it colder than
Absolute zero,
Less than a quarter inch
From her face.
Yes, her.
I step, startled, backwards
And lower
My legendary blade.
A wall is suddenly at my back,
I slowly sink to the bloody street,
Blood I have spilt
From others like her,
But they were not like her.
Still a few miles away,
The others close slowly in.
I begin to shake,
Begin to ask for mercy.
This cannot be!
Not her, not the girl I love,
Please!
But a vampire she is,
Despite my pleas.
I should have known already,
After she drained my heart dry, though
Not realizing, and giving me
Nothing back in return.
The others are here now,
My death is inevitable, I know,
So I lower my head
And wait for it to come.
She brings her head down beside mine,
And I feel a small prick
Of pain in my neck.
Bursts of bright lights
Flash and speed behind
My tightly shut eyes.
I release the handle of my sword
And relax my muscles,
Gradually sliding
Into the World of the Damned.
The lights stop,
I am gone.

Sunlight streams through my window,
Awakening me from my slumber.
I wonder that I am not dead,
Was it nothing more
Than a horrible nightmare?
I draw out my blade,
My night was real,
So says the message, scrawled in blood,
On my sword.
It is from her,
"You have been allowed to live,
It will not be so violent
When next we meet."
Then signed her name.




Copyright © solmyr1404 ... [ 2004-01-11 03:17:53]
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Re: The Message of the Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by SAT on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 04:25:26 PM AEST
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really good. i like the story line of it. im guessing that you wrote this for the girl that is in the hospital, i really hope she makes it, and im still praying!...never give up, and hold on, cuse everyone at one point or another goes through it, and it would be horrible if you had to go through it now... i hope she makes it, and just remember, have faith, because god always doesn't give second chances. I'm so sorry!




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