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Array ( [sid] => 31322 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU [time] => 2004-01-10 23:55:36 [hometext] => WRITTEN: 3/30/1988 [bodytext] => My eyes are opening in my soul.
Learning more as I go.
Now maybe,
You don't like things I've done,
learning lessons is never fun.

Passing thru my minds eye,
forgive me if I made you cry.
Before you know it someday,
a stranger may need to pay.

No matter what
it'll get thru>>'cause look at you.
Forgive me for sitting in God's seat.
We're all unique.

Keep trying,
we've all got to learn,
pay the wrongs we've done.
There's hope for me and you
'cause we're jus passing thru! [comments] => 8 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 43 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU

Contributed by emystar on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 11:55:36 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



My eyes are opening in my soul.
Learning more as I go.
Now maybe,
You don't like things I've done,
learning lessons is never fun.

Passing thru my minds eye,
forgive me if I made you cry.
Before you know it someday,
a stranger may need to pay.

No matter what
it'll get thru>>'cause look at you.
Forgive me for sitting in God's seat.
We're all unique.

Keep trying,
we've all got to learn,
pay the wrongs we've done.
There's hope for me and you
'cause we're jus passing thru!




Copyright © emystar ... [ 2004-01-10 23:55:36]
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Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:20:04 AM AEST
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Yes..we are all just passing thru....and always learning...
Hugs
Jen


Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:43:42 AM AEST
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I agree on that one! This was a great write I enjoyed this! Christina


Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:49:45 AM AEST
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Agreed we're all just passing thru..a wonderful poem..peace luv and joy..
venkat


Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:10:08 AM AEST
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Very true!! Great writing!!

Anne


Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU (User Rating: 1 )
by eternal_sorrows on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:51:26 AM AEST
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Great thought here, yes, we're just passing through. Good meter, rhyme and deep thought!

ES


Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 04:40:17 PM AEST
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Words of wisdom my friend,
Well done

Larry


Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU (User Rating: 1 )
by 13Hopes on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 05:17:18 AM AEST
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So true are your words, this poem certainly wakes the mind and heart. Well written

Cheers
#13


Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU (User Rating: 1 )
by Jazz on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 11:50:14 PM AEST
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This world is not my home, I'm just passing through... I bet the man upstairs is smiling...

Jazz




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