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Let my mind flow with all the ways of thinking that you have rearranged.
Let me sit amongst the trees with you and alter the old, well-trodden perceptions I hold into beautiful new ones.
Teach me all you feel every day.
Let me hold your hands loosely in mine
So i can connect with your shining, fresh energy.
Allow me to listen to how you hear every note in a song.
Spread your circle of golden light just a little, so i may bask in it.
Let me be woven into the links you have with the earth.
Let me meet your inspiration.
Let my thoughts travel with yours to see where you go when your eyes glaze over in that secret way.
Let me use my wings with you.
Let me dance with you in the air as the dust particles sparkle, reflecting the sun [comments] => 5 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 2 [informant] => dolly_dagger [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

the beautiful poet

Contributed by dolly_dagger on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:08:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Let me see how you see, poetic soul.
Let my mind flow with all the ways of thinking that you have rearranged.
Let me sit amongst the trees with you and alter the old, well-trodden perceptions I hold into beautiful new ones.
Teach me all you feel every day.
Let me hold your hands loosely in mine
So i can connect with your shining, fresh energy.
Allow me to listen to how you hear every note in a song.
Spread your circle of golden light just a little, so i may bask in it.
Let me be woven into the links you have with the earth.
Let me meet your inspiration.
Let my thoughts travel with yours to see where you go when your eyes glaze over in that secret way.
Let me use my wings with you.
Let me dance with you in the air as the dust particles sparkle, reflecting the sun

Copyright © dolly_dagger ... [ 2004-01-10 18:08:52]
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Re: the beautiful poet (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:13:19 PM AEST
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The imagery used is incredible. To borrow a word from your title let me say it is beautiful....

Kie

Re: the beautiful poet (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:44:20 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc...this is absolutely beautiful...
Jenni

Re: the beautiful poet (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 09:29:02 PM AEST
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Hi Dolly,
Absolutely beautifull.
Very wel said.
Welcome to ypdc.
U have found the palce 2 be.
peace, joy, huggs,
emy

Re: the beautiful poet (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 11:18:42 PM AEST
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WELCOME TO YPDC
Your poetry is eloguently beautiful, and we are so happy you have come to bless up with your write.
I'm looking forward to more of these....they are just simply "out of sight!"
lovingcritters
ConSue

Re: the beautiful poet (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 04:04:40 PM AEST
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Interesting write. Great images here. Very nice.

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