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I’ve begged and I’ve pleaded,
Yet you still stay.
There was a time, you I needed.
Now I only feel defeated.
I asked and I’ve yelled for you to go.
You’re the reason my tears still flow.

How can I make you leave?
I no longer need you by my side.
It is your fault I still grieve.
You’ve stripped me of my pride.
By now, you should have died.
Why won’t you go away?
You grow stronger every day.

Why do you still nag me?
Why are you still here?
Please, just let me be.
You, I’ve grown to fear.
Tormenting me, for over a year.
Can’t you just move on?
I really wish you were gone.

Everyone tells me you’re great.
You, I should adore.
But you, I’ve come to hate.
You hold me back when I want more.
I don’t need you, like I did before.
You cause me anguish and leave me in pain.
Break my heart and drive me insane.

Find someone else to abuse.
Another life to destroy.
Someone else to confuse.
Someone else, with whom you can toy.
You’ve never brought me any joy.
Please let me free of your control.
And give me back all the love you stole.

For some time I held you dear.
But nothing you tell me is true.
So I no longer want you here.
Please, find somebody new.
And once again, I ask you,
Please HOPE, just go away.
But… I see you’re here to stay.
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Please Go Away!

Contributed by MisterRight on Saturday, 31st August 2002 @ 08:45:34 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Why won’t you just go away?
I’ve begged and I’ve pleaded,
Yet you still stay.
There was a time, you I needed.
Now I only feel defeated.
I asked and I’ve yelled for you to go.
You’re the reason my tears still flow.

How can I make you leave?
I no longer need you by my side.
It is your fault I still grieve.
You’ve stripped me of my pride.
By now, you should have died.
Why won’t you go away?
You grow stronger every day.

Why do you still nag me?
Why are you still here?
Please, just let me be.
You, I’ve grown to fear.
Tormenting me, for over a year.
Can’t you just move on?
I really wish you were gone.

Everyone tells me you’re great.
You, I should adore.
But you, I’ve come to hate.
You hold me back when I want more.
I don’t need you, like I did before.
You cause me anguish and leave me in pain.
Break my heart and drive me insane.

Find someone else to abuse.
Another life to destroy.
Someone else to confuse.
Someone else, with whom you can toy.
You’ve never brought me any joy.
Please let me free of your control.
And give me back all the love you stole.

For some time I held you dear.
But nothing you tell me is true.
So I no longer want you here.
Please, find somebody new.
And once again, I ask you,
Please HOPE, just go away.
But… I see you’re here to stay.

Copyright Â© MisterRight ... [ 2002-08-31 20:45:34]
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Re: Please Go Away! (User Rating: 1 )
by Mystery_Girl on Saturday, 31st August 2002 @ 09:28:20 PM AEST
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some are hard to get rid of sometimes from our minds.....good write.....i have someone that i cant make go from me and just wrote one in called Forever...maybe u want to go check it out if u like....:-)..Good write u have done....

Re: Please Go Away! (User Rating: 1 )
by chatabox on Saturday, 31st August 2002 @ 09:36:36 PM AEST
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where theres hope there is always a way ahead, who ever or whenever that is.

Re: Please Go Away! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 03:40:05 AM AEST
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Good write..... ironic, isn't it.....there are those who want to get rid of Hope..and some who wish they had her......
Jenni

Re: Please Go Away! (User Rating: 1 )
by faffeee on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 07:43:33 AM AEST
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excellent write, developing as it continues.
"Everyone tells me you’re great.
You, I should adore.
But you, I’ve come to hate....
Find someone else to abuse.
Another life to destroy.
Someone else to confuse.
Someone else, with whom you can toy. "
i really liked these lines. awful how the one thing which can really help us can also be our downfall. xxx

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