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Forsaken
Contributed by
SkYYBLu
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Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:54:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The sun never fades without bringing me days
Of woe, destruction, and pain
The stars never shine without blinding my eyes
From the truth and from lies in disguise
The moon never beams without bringing me dreams
Of false hopes of love at my grasp
The rain never falls without stirring my heart
With your calls of my name in the mist
The wind never blows until I know for sure
That you will never return to me
The sky is not blue without thinking of you
And the pain that I put myself through
The flowers ne'er bloom until I seek my doom
Of being forsaken without you
Copyright ©
SkYYBLu
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2004-01-10 12:54:25]
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Re: Forsaken
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 01:38:22 PM AEST
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The imagery in this poem is very vivid. So much sadness and pain! Very good writing!
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