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This Reality
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 10:41:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Hate breeds evil and evil breeds fear
The end of you is so very near
Pain breeds sorrow and sorrow consumes you whole
All my sanity you quickly stole
Ignorance breeds anger and anger breeds fights
Your life and soul I shall steal tonight
Fear brings death and death brings release
Never will I let you rest in peace
Insanity breeds torture and torture brings pleasure
Never will your soul be treasured
Hate and evil both breed immortality
Never will you know of this reality.
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CuttersAngel
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2004-01-10 10:41:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: This Reality
(User Rating: 1 ) by alecfernadez on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 10:49:24 AM AEST (User
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Yeah, sweet poem, Its got alot of anger and darkness in it, which I like, and your descriptiveness and un-subtleness rules.
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Re: This Reality
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 11:08:58 AM AEST (User
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Uhh very dark and angry! Well chosen words! Great writing!
Anne |
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Re: This Reality
(User Rating: 1 ) by EmSal on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:40:32 AM AEST (User
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Wow disturbing. I quite liked it.
Emma. |
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Re: This Reality
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 10:54:49 AM AEST (User
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That was very nicely dark. I enjoyed it very much. |
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Re: This Reality
(User Rating: 1 ) by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 09:35:10 PM AEST (User
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A very neat and dark poem!!! (hehe, it seems everybody are saying that, but oh well, it is the truth! *shrug*)... this poem really made me thinks...... |
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