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It's far beyond my knowledge
My life has frozen beneath me
Like a lake under winter snow

He left me there to hang
To continue on without him
The ice swarming my heart
Feels it shall never get broken

Did i expect this awakening
This entrence into hell
Cause the loneliness in this room
Is as cold as his look I stole [comments] => 4 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 22 [informant] => fallen_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

cold

Contributed by fallen_eyes on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:51:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I don't know what I'm feeling
It's far beyond my knowledge
My life has frozen beneath me
Like a lake under winter snow

He left me there to hang
To continue on without him
The ice swarming my heart
Feels it shall never get broken

Did i expect this awakening
This entrence into hell
Cause the loneliness in this room
Is as cold as his look I stole

Copyright © fallen_eyes ... [ 2004-01-09 19:51:14]
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Re: cold (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:56:00 PM AEST
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Again tam brilliant
really brilliant
try to hold up hun you know im always there if you wanna talk or anything ;) hehhe

you know what i mean hun :)

luv sausage

Re: cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:43:05 AM AEST
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The simplicity of the title did not prepare me for the pain and emotion I found in this piece. Again, you let the imagery take center stage, and again, you compose another work of somber beauty. I'm hooked.

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Empty_Soul on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:47:41 PM AEST
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once again an amazing write tam. feelin ur pain again, try not to hold on too hard it can only hurt you more. here with my shoulder to cry on if needs be! =) luv always john

Re: cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:44:26 PM AEST
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This one really grabbed my attention. I loved it. I know that pain and iciness. Great write.

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