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Array ( [sid] => 31206 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Aflower with no petals [time] => 2004-01-09 19:29:29 [hometext] => a week apart! [bodytext] => I miss you

I miss you like a branch would it's leaves
like the sky and the sun
like a flower with no petals

I cry without you

I cry without you for this pain in my chest
for the tear rolling down my cheek
for my fallen smile

I need you
I need you here holding me tight
gently kissing my lips
stroking my soft skin

I love you
I love you when you hold my gaze in your eyes
when i hear your voice next to mine
when you find my lost smile

I'll love you always [comments] => 6 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 22 [informant] => fallen_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Aflower with no petals

Contributed by fallen_eyes on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:29:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I miss you

I miss you like a branch would it's leaves
like the sky and the sun
like a flower with no petals

I cry without you

I cry without you for this pain in my chest
for the tear rolling down my cheek
for my fallen smile

I need you
I need you here holding me tight
gently kissing my lips
stroking my soft skin

I love you
I love you when you hold my gaze in your eyes
when i hear your voice next to mine
when you find my lost smile

I'll love you always

Copyright © fallen_eyes ... [ 2004-01-09 19:29:29]
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Re: Aflower with no petals (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:37:45 PM AEST
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Sweet, loving.......but terribly Sad. Hope your loved one comes back! Beautiful imagery and wording!

Anne

Re: Aflower with no petals (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:49:51 PM AEST
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Brilliant tam.. really amazing it really is .. i love your use of imagery in this everything about it sings to me

luv luke

Re: Aflower with no petals (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:39:25 AM AEST
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This was great! The imagery, the flow, the sadness, just awesome. You've earned me as a fan. Please, keep posting!

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: Aflower with no petals (User Rating: 1 )
by Empty_Soul on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:43:20 PM AEST
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hey tam, i feel ur pain. like you jus said ur there for me im always here for you too. another great poem. luv john

Re: Aflower with no petals (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:42:20 PM AEST
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That was incredibly touching. I enjoyed every single word. Very nice.

Re: Aflower with no petals (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterat_Zool on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 07:37:43 PM AEST
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it's funny how, no matter how many love poems are written, there is always some new way to say how a person feels about a loved one... muy bien... adios., tu amigo, Butterat Zool.

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