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Array ( [sid] => 31133 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wondering [time] => 2004-01-09 00:38:09 [hometext] => I wrote this the morning before I realized he broke my heart. But I still wish him happiness. [bodytext] => You are here beside me wondering; can this ever be?
The way you look at her, is now the way you look at me.
The first day that we spent together, was like icing on the cake.
Now you ask that if on Sunday, I would like to go on a date.
The answer was so simple, yet still you stayed with her.
Of course I answered yes to you, what else would you have me do?
Now I sit her thinking, wondering.
What that mind of yours is pondering.
Hoping that someday, some how,
This secret love we share will come out.
Your minds made up, and I can wait.
Until that heart of hers will brake.
Together again we can be,
Sitting there, you holding me.
That night we shared, staying up talking.
The secrets you know, my love, my darling.
Two halves making a whole,
Together in love and continues to grow.
Nothing to tear us apart from each other,
Together we'll be, together forever.
Don't doubt my love, You know it's true.
You are the one my heart belongs to.
What are your thoughts, what do you wonder about?
Please, tell me, you have no doubt.
No second thought, please don't be blue.
I can't wait for the day to be seen with you.
My rock, My post, My only hope,
I ask you now, please, don't mope.
She'll catch on, then we're through,
Then I can never again be with you.

But when you wonder, don't let her see.
See the way you look at me.
For a month or so, I think I can wait.
But waiting so long, I truley, truley hate.
This sneaking around, No one can know.
During those times, oh, how I need you so.
Beside each other, together we stand.
Alone, yet together, unable to hold hands.

Alone we'll be, till again we meet.
But now you are here beside me wondering; can this ever be? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 33 [informant] => hope_love_n_faith [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Wondering

Contributed by hope_love_n_faith on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:38:09 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

You are here beside me wondering; can this ever be?
The way you look at her, is now the way you look at me.
The first day that we spent together, was like icing on the cake.
Now you ask that if on Sunday, I would like to go on a date.
The answer was so simple, yet still you stayed with her.
Of course I answered yes to you, what else would you have me do?
Now I sit her thinking, wondering.
What that mind of yours is pondering.
Hoping that someday, some how,
This secret love we share will come out.
Your minds made up, and I can wait.
Until that heart of hers will brake.
Together again we can be,
Sitting there, you holding me.
That night we shared, staying up talking.
The secrets you know, my love, my darling.
Two halves making a whole,
Together in love and continues to grow.
Nothing to tear us apart from each other,
Together we'll be, together forever.
Don't doubt my love, You know it's true.
You are the one my heart belongs to.
What are your thoughts, what do you wonder about?
Please, tell me, you have no doubt.
No second thought, please don't be blue.
I can't wait for the day to be seen with you.
My rock, My post, My only hope,
I ask you now, please, don't mope.
She'll catch on, then we're through,
Then I can never again be with you.

But when you wonder, don't let her see.
See the way you look at me.
For a month or so, I think I can wait.
But waiting so long, I truley, truley hate.
This sneaking around, No one can know.
During those times, oh, how I need you so.
Beside each other, together we stand.
Alone, yet together, unable to hold hands.

Alone we'll be, till again we meet.
But now you are here beside me wondering; can this ever be?

Copyright © hope_love_n_faith ... [ 2004-01-09 00:38:09]
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Re: Wondering (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 03:58:19 AM AEST
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Wow... This was me. Really. No kidding. My parents didn't want me to be with my girlfriend, to young they said (As I look back, I see they're right, even though I kinda don't like to admit it.). I hated sneaking around. I wanted the whole world to know what I had. I had to let it out somehow. I found a pe and started writing. And this is the longest comment I've ever made, I think..
Take care.
David

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