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Array ( [sid] => 31104 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nothing [time] => 2004-01-08 16:46:29 [hometext] => A rather dark poem. Hope you like it. [bodytext] => My life is falling apart
around me.
Relationships are crumbling,
fun and joy are becoming
irrelevent.
People are changing
around me,
some for better,
some for worse.
I'm afraid that I'm
changing as well,
but I don't think
that it's for better...
There's something
wrong with me,
but I can't figure out
what!
It's tearing me up
inside,
and nothing
can stop it.
Nothing can save me,
nobody wants to save me.
My life means nothing now,
though I wish that
in my brief time here,
that I could have amounted
to something.
But that's just the dream
of a feeble mind
not wanting to let go.
But unfortunately...
I have to.
There's nothing left for me,
everything's just gone.
There's nothing left...
but a shell...
with nothing inside of it. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 13 [informant] => MrWrite [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Nothing

Contributed by MrWrite on Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 04:46:29 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My life is falling apart
around me.
Relationships are crumbling,
fun and joy are becoming
irrelevent.
People are changing
around me,
some for better,
some for worse.
I'm afraid that I'm
changing as well,
but I don't think
that it's for better...
There's something
wrong with me,
but I can't figure out
what!
It's tearing me up
inside,
and nothing
can stop it.
Nothing can save me,
nobody wants to save me.
My life means nothing now,
though I wish that
in my brief time here,
that I could have amounted
to something.
But that's just the dream
of a feeble mind
not wanting to let go.
But unfortunately...
I have to.
There's nothing left for me,
everything's just gone.
There's nothing left...
but a shell...
with nothing inside of it.

Copyright © MrWrite ... [ 2004-01-08 16:46:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 06:06:47 PM AEST
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So much pain and sadness! I mostly feel like you, understand every single word. This poem will be surely on my top list at the moment. Great writing, description, and transfer of emotion. Hope you find piece ;)

Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by bluoreo on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 02:37:32 AM AEST
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This poem was fantastic. What I really liked was that I felt your emotion through it.

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