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Array ( [sid] => 31060 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm All Over You... [time] => 2004-01-08 11:26:21 [hometext] => heres a couple short poems that i wrote over this one guy... that i guess wasn't worth it. the first on is when we were going out, then second is when we broke up and the last one was just a general over veiw of the relastionship. tell me what you think. [bodytext] => Iritated,
agervated,
couldn't be more frusterated..
don't know how..
don't know why..
all i can say is your *hopeless*

~~~~~~~~~
Just because,
It went by fast,
Doen't mean the memories won't last,

`Cause times takes its toll,
And things happen,
Maybe by chance,
Or fear,
Or distrust,

But still, just remember it's true...
The memories not over,
They're still with you...

~~~~~~~~~
Truth or lies?
Either way...
In the end..
Truth WILL reveal itself from within,
And when this happens,
You will see....
Truth will declare the victory.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 22 [informant] => xDeex [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I'm All Over You...

Contributed by xDeex on Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 11:26:21 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Iritated,
agervated,
couldn't be more frusterated..
don't know how..
don't know why..
all i can say is your *hopeless*

~~~~~~~~~
Just because,
It went by fast,
Doen't mean the memories won't last,

`Cause times takes its toll,
And things happen,
Maybe by chance,
Or fear,
Or distrust,

But still, just remember it's true...
The memories not over,
They're still with you...

~~~~~~~~~
Truth or lies?
Either way...
In the end..
Truth WILL reveal itself from within,
And when this happens,
You will see....
Truth will declare the victory.

Copyright © xDeex ... [ 2004-01-08 11:26:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I'm All Over You... (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrochick on Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:04:14 PM AEST
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I really like the last one its cool and true

Re: I'm All Over You... (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:39:56 PM AEST
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I like ALL of em, short but very very very sweet. You can see your emotions on display clearly, and I like that in a poem.
Keep up the good work
Alec Fernandez

Re: I'm All Over You... (User Rating: 1 )
by eternal_sorrows on Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:54:16 PM AEST
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I really liked this alot. It kept my interest from beginning to end!

es

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