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[aid] => mick
[title] => Down And Ups!
[time] => 2002-08-31 18:29:11
[hometext] => This is that mental discussion continuously going round and round and round inside my head!
I do hope it's not just me which has this!
Is it?
[bodytext] => This isn’t poetry that you think you are writing,
It’s your fingers with the keys just constantly fighting!
But I love to write it clears my head
And keeps me from staying watching t.v in bed!
If it were writing you’d be using a pen
And you’d make it your living not just do it now and then!
But it’s the only way I seem to know how,
To open my heart and let my true feelings show!
Feelings what feelings all this is so forced,
You wouldn’t know a feeling if kicked by a horse!
I know I go on about the same old thing,
But I love her she makes my heart want to sing!
Love that’s a joke if you really do mean,
You’d be glad she’s now happy, make the break one that’s clean!
It’s just she told me she doesn’t fall for such lies
And I’ve known him for years his BS I recognise!
You have no idea; you don’t even know yourself,
You are too busy worrying what’s good or bad for your health!
But I wish for my life to be one that’s long,
For this I’ll need a good heart, one which is strong!
What are you saying, it sounds to me like a joke,
You might be clean and tidy on the outside, but look you just sit there and smoke!
I know that it’s not at all good for me,
But at least it’s almost natural; it once grew like a tree!
The only animals in this world supposed to breathe smoke,
Are Dragons and they’re only tales from ancient folk!
Oh dear I am so sorry for having my one single vice,
Does this make me less human, or even less nice?
Out for a walk you should’ve been instead of sitting,
Look back and read all this rubbish you’ve just written!
Stop having a go at me, I try to do little wrong,
In this world of life’s wonders I’d just like to get along!
I’ll leave you alone when you get what I’m saying,
Get out there and do something, don’t just sit there complaining!
Down and up go my moods, always wondering why?
And will I stay this confused till the day that I die?
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Down And Ups!
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
on
Saturday, 31st August 2002 @ 06:29:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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This isn’t poetry that you think you are writing,
It’s your fingers with the keys just constantly fighting!
But I love to write it clears my head
And keeps me from staying watching t.v in bed!
If it were writing you’d be using a pen
And you’d make it your living not just do it now and then!
But it’s the only way I seem to know how,
To open my heart and let my true feelings show!
Feelings what feelings all this is so forced,
You wouldn’t know a feeling if kicked by a horse!
I know I go on about the same old thing,
But I love her she makes my heart want to sing!
Love that’s a joke if you really do mean,
You’d be glad she’s now happy, make the break one that’s clean!
It’s just she told me she doesn’t fall for such lies
And I’ve known him for years his BS I recognise!
You have no idea; you don’t even know yourself,
You are too busy worrying what’s good or bad for your health!
But I wish for my life to be one that’s long,
For this I’ll need a good heart, one which is strong!
What are you saying, it sounds to me like a joke,
You might be clean and tidy on the outside, but look you just sit there and smoke!
I know that it’s not at all good for me,
But at least it’s almost natural; it once grew like a tree!
The only animals in this world supposed to breathe smoke,
Are Dragons and they’re only tales from ancient folk!
Oh dear I am so sorry for having my one single vice,
Does this make me less human, or even less nice?
Out for a walk you should’ve been instead of sitting,
Look back and read all this rubbish you’ve just written!
Stop having a go at me, I try to do little wrong,
In this world of life’s wonders I’d just like to get along!
I’ll leave you alone when you get what I’m saying,
Get out there and do something, don’t just sit there complaining!
Down and up go my moods, always wondering why?
And will I stay this confused till the day that I die?
Copyright ©
Unaekseveer1
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Re: Down And Ups!
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by Rose on
Saturday, 31st August 2002 @ 10:22:57 PM AEST
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NIcely written for all you feel my dear Dean.
If everyone could admit what all they feel, they would admit to the kinds of feelings you expressed here. You're not alone, and I am sorry for not responding as I should to help you lean on me, when you need to vent. but keep writing, but also go for that walk too, for after a good write, it does help and walking down a path, meeting others on your way, you forget why your out and enjoy the time away. I have to remember myself, that it will get better, but going thru the trials and lessons of pained life and also the loosing of a friend, one who hurt me, like your best friend hurt you, but for me, she wrote emails without me knowing to others and also has taken from me, and wants to harm me. on top of my medical disorder I had just found out. So I am also wondering about if life will be this way for me.... I cannot let it get to me, but writing and helping others see too, that it will get better. I am seeing more and more of those little things, you know the ones that make you smile and laugh, even at yourself, like when you cross the road in front of traffic and trip over a crack in the street, I laugh at myself, maybe a little red too..... but then look up and see others smile, for I am not mad, just walk a little straighter and of course pick up my feet. or the praying mantis I found on the bridge the other day,s he stuck out so much, I carried her to a green field so she blended in. Little things... mean so much, you forget your pains and moans for awhile to just enjoy those little things....... write about this one DEan, you can even put some of my thoughts to it, if you like...... Take care and enjoy the new learning you're getting and the pics were great. thanks...... Always, Amber Rose :) |
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Re: Down And Ups!
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 04:13:51 AM AEST
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Hey Amber,
Having just found all of my photos in a box in the loft, I’m now embarking on creating my own web site. When this gets done, I’ll put the site address in my profile on this site instead of sending them; they’ll take up too much memory for email! If you wish to view them, then you can freely! (This may take some time though as I’m only beginning to learn what needs to be done!)
A fair part of what I’m now doing with my life has come about from the things You said to me about what you do with graphical artwork, among other things! This seems to have jogged my brain into realising just what I should be doing with my part of this wonderful opportunity of life we’ve all been gifted!
So I’d like to say, Thankyou Amber Rose
I don’t know if you realise just how much of a fresh inspirational breeze You are!
Please I must ask you not to feel at all sorry, as I really do understand you having very important things in your life. My wish being that I could be of more help!
With love
Dean ;-) |
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Re: Down And Ups!
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 10:50:37 AM AEST
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Dean, I think that we all have conversations like this with ourselves, at least I do. There's nothing wrong with it. It helps me work out my problems.
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Re: Down And Ups!
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 09:25:12 PM AEST
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Yes I suppose we do Candice,
I just wish sometimes these such conversations would lead me to some sort of answers not just more questions to ponder!
Another I missed Candice, sorry again and thankyou for your comments wich are always very much appreciated!!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Down And Ups!
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by ShadowsCloud on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 08:31:37 PM AEST
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Dean, These conversations don't always help me. Here lately they have only given me more questions that answers.
It is ok about you missing some I don't expect you or anyone else to be perfect.
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Re: Down And Ups!
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 08:43:51 PM AEST
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Hey Candice, I am reading these and a problem I have within me is expecting myself to be as perfect as isn't possible!
Although I don't expect this in others, so I don't know why I do it to me?
With love
Dean:-)
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Re: Down And Ups!
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by ShadowsCloud on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 08:49:05 PM AEST
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Dean, I have found that a lot of people I know expect them selves to be perfect. Even I some times expect myself to be perfect even though it just isn't always possible. Like last night I go really upset with my self when I dropped the bowl of cake batter for the cupcakes I was making I broke the glas bowl and made a huge mess and I was upset at me. Because I felt that I should have dropped the bowl.
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