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Array ( [sid] => 31006 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a midnight dream [time] => 2004-01-07 19:24:55 [hometext] => Hi everybody, I am new to this site and my English isn't that good, so please be mercyful with me! ^_^ [bodytext] => Through the tears of ever-lasting night,
Once more, the gentle tapping of rain,
Bring you back, into my dream...
Like the ultimate butterfly,
Bearing a sweetest fantasy,
You seem so close, yet, so far...

Don't want to open my eyes,
Too afraid to realise,
What keeping me company,
is only a shadow,
A quivering shadow, of mine...
Quietly I listen to the rain's sighs,
As the tears run across my heart...

What can I do, baby,
To see that eternal flame, in your eyes!
Will it lit, by the touch of our lips?
Or burn with the love I felt,
Deep inside...
What should I do, angel,
To feel your heart beating with mine?
With every shining days,
Through hundred of lonely nights,
Together we shall dance,
Until the end of time... [comments] => 12 [counter] => 348 [topic] => 2 [informant] => whisper-of-night [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

a midnight dream

Contributed by whisper-of-night on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 07:24:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Through the tears of ever-lasting night,
Once more, the gentle tapping of rain,
Bring you back, into my dream...
Like the ultimate butterfly,
Bearing a sweetest fantasy,
You seem so close, yet, so far...

Don't want to open my eyes,
Too afraid to realise,
What keeping me company,
is only a shadow,
A quivering shadow, of mine...
Quietly I listen to the rain's sighs,
As the tears run across my heart...

What can I do, baby,
To see that eternal flame, in your eyes!
Will it lit, by the touch of our lips?
Or burn with the love I felt,
Deep inside...
What should I do, angel,
To feel your heart beating with mine?
With every shining days,
Through hundred of lonely nights,
Together we shall dance,
Until the end of time...

Copyright © whisper-of-night ... [ 2004-01-07 19:24:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: a midnight dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 07:28:01 PM AEST
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This is very beautiful, a fine write.
Welcome to the site , you are amongst friends

Re: a midnight dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 07:36:03 PM AEST
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very very nice.... welcome! :)

Re: a midnight dream (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 07:39:06 PM AEST
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Welcom 2 our global family here.
Great writing and I see nuthing wrong with your English.
Good work, written like a pro.
peace, joy, luv, huggs, welcome,
emy-

Re: a midnight dream (User Rating: 1 )
by monkey on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 07:48:52 PM AEST
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This poem is wonderful! How long have you been writing? You sound like a pro! Welcome to the site. We're one big family here. Feel free to write anytime if you need anything. Once again, welcome and nice job.

Monkey

Re: a midnight dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 08:25:47 PM AEST
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All I can say is I wish I had that good of a command of the english language. Beautifully done and welcome.

Larry

Re: a midnight dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 09:04:53 PM AEST
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Welcome, welcome, welcome! I have found this to be the nicest of places and you will too! Your poem was great, I look forward to the next one.

Kie

Re: a midnight dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 09:25:05 PM AEST
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Welcome to the best poetry site on the net!! This is very beautiful... You don't seem to have a problem with your English to me... Keep them coming... I look forward to reading more of your work..
Jenni

Re: a midnight dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:27:11 PM AEST
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Whats proper english? Good write. Welcome. I liked this.

Re: a midnight dream (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 03:20:20 PM AEST
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beautiful poem with warm images, welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: a midnight dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:32:38 AM AEST
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Beautiful! Full ov vivid imagery and very sweet!

Anne :D

Re: a midnight dream (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:48:02 PM AEST
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Hey there kiddo, great write i loved it your english is just fine!

Re: a midnight dream (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 09:21:27 PM AEST
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good poem

Jamie

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