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Array ( [sid] => 31001 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Vampires Curse [time] => 2004-01-07 17:47:13 [hometext] => My First Post! Yay. Comments appreciated [bodytext] => My empty soul snaps,
darkness enters, light is dead
an eternity of evil becomes me
whilst feeding off the innocence of life,
living outside of day only at night,
never to see the burning sun again
this is my curse and blessing.
I am an immortal; a vampire,
forced to live in exile, an outsider
living off others unlike me
i am alone in this hate filled world
this is my eternal curséd life. [comments] => 11 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Empty_Soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Vampires Curse

Contributed by Empty_Soul on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 05:47:13 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



My empty soul snaps,
darkness enters, light is dead
an eternity of evil becomes me
whilst feeding off the innocence of life,
living outside of day only at night,
never to see the burning sun again
this is my curse and blessing.
I am an immortal; a vampire,
forced to live in exile, an outsider
living off others unlike me
i am alone in this hate filled world
this is my eternal curséd life.



Copyright © Empty_Soul ... [ 2004-01-07 17:47:13]
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Re: Vampires Curse (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 05:56:46 PM AEST
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Welcome to the site, put up ya feet sit back and enjoy yourself....

I love your write, so full of imagery and so full of talent i cant wait for you next write

keep up th great work

all the best

Luke (lulus)


Re: Vampires Curse (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 06:05:07 PM AEST
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Hmmmmm sounds like an Anne Rice fan (Am I wrong?) like myself. I liked the way you described the pain of the vampire, good imagery as well ;).


Re: Vampires Curse (User Rating: 1 )
by monkey on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 06:11:13 PM AEST
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Bravo! Good poem. Welcome to the site. Its lotsa fun here. If you need any help I'll be here. Once again, nice poem.


Re: Vampires Curse (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 06:19:04 PM AEST
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Well done and welcome to our little slice of heaven! lol

Larry


Re: Vampires Curse (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:53:16 AM AEST
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nice taste from your darkside... was this more about describing a vampire's life, or your own?
great write.


Re: Vampires Curse (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 06:49:16 AM AEST
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Darkness flows within your words, life is cursed wether through Vamperism or not. Welcome to the site.
I liked the poem as I like all dark poetry keep it up I look forward to reading more.


Re: Vampires Curse (User Rating: 1 )
by fallen_eyes on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:32:56 PM AEST
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wow i never knew you had such a talent. let me know when you write any more. luv ya T xx


Re: Vampires Curse (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 03:17:37 PM AEST
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ahhh wonderful, warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa


Re: Vampires Curse (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:00:47 AM AEST
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Truely have you described the curse,
Displayed quite wonderfully in verse,
Immortal life now tastes sour.
So well has this vampire infernal
been captured in poetry eternal.
This work is a dark, black flower.

Richard.
Soz, Best I could do. Well done. Good poem.


Re: Vampires Curse (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:15:54 PM AEST
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i'm not really a fanatic on poems. but i really liked this one. keep it up.


Re: Vampires Curse (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:25:58 PM AEST
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This was brillant. I liked it alot.. Great poem..


take care
christina




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