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Array ( [sid] => 30986 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Love This Moment,Not Me [time] => 2004-01-07 12:59:19 [hometext] => Make Love 2 Break Love,, This is making love on paper,, I felt everyword! plz comment x x [bodytext] => You stroke your hand
Upon my face
It shows the beauty
You embrace
Such a body
Shadows the wall
My pulse fastens
Beginning to fall
You push against me
Your movement slow
Im in your hands
Dont let me go
Pullin me close
Im glad we're here
I grip your skin
And pull you near
A precious kiss
The softest touch
Each word you whisper
They mean so much
I hold you tight
Between each thigh
No alcohol fuels
This natural high!
You kiss my neck
Now controling me
But i hold the power
Thats deeper you see
You want me so much
I want you too!
Are you blind to the fact
IM IN LOVE WITH YOU
Can i forgive?
Can i forget?
Your leading me on
Just to feel no regret
Now can you feel
Of this passion i hold
It runs through YOUR hands
As each moment unfolds
I Love You, U say through
A breath thats so deep
On a wedding finger
This promise i keep,,,, [comments] => 6 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 13 [informant] => LouisaMontagu [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
You Love This Moment,Not Me

Contributed by LouisaMontagu on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:59:19 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



You stroke your hand
Upon my face
It shows the beauty
You embrace
Such a body
Shadows the wall
My pulse fastens
Beginning to fall
You push against me
Your movement slow
Im in your hands
Dont let me go
Pullin me close
Im glad we're here
I grip your skin
And pull you near
A precious kiss
The softest touch
Each word you whisper
They mean so much
I hold you tight
Between each thigh
No alcohol fuels
This natural high!
You kiss my neck
Now controling me
But i hold the power
Thats deeper you see
You want me so much
I want you too!
Are you blind to the fact
IM IN LOVE WITH YOU
Can i forgive?
Can i forget?
Your leading me on
Just to feel no regret
Now can you feel
Of this passion i hold
It runs through YOUR hands
As each moment unfolds
I Love You, U say through
A breath thats so deep
On a wedding finger
This promise i keep,,,,




Copyright © LouisaMontagu ... [ 2004-01-07 12:59:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: You Love This Moment,Not Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 01:15:20 PM AEST
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This is very carnal and great! I am in that same situation and u put it into great words! Great poem! Love:::Kirby


Re: You Love This Moment,Not Me (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 03:25:09 PM AEST
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brilliant write!


Re: You Love This Moment,Not Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 05:34:17 PM AEST
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Interesting. I liked it. Nice write.


Re: You Love This Moment,Not Me (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 11:17:56 AM AEST
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hmm very,very sensual!!
i enjoyed this write n felt every moment,, i was there!!!!!


Re: You Love This Moment,Not Me (User Rating: 1 )
by swiftsouljah on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:15:31 PM AEST
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this is awesome... great job

wayne


Re: You Love This Moment,Not Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 05:44:20 PM AEST
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AWWW this is such a grea poem! I love thsi so much! Great write! Love:::Kirby




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