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Array ( [sid] => 30972 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => For.The.Last.Time. [time] => 2004-01-07 10:18:50 [hometext] => This is my first poem i am summiting. Please comment. [bodytext] => Now again I have lived another year,
Yet again, I’m living in fear,
I thought that I could face you,
But this is something that I may never do,

How can you hurt the ones you love,
The ones that God has sent you from above,
As I sit alone by myself, crying away my tears,
Does it make you see through your own fears?

Its gone by so fast,
With a childhood in the past,
To your husband I was a whore,
But he never made me feel I could be more,

He pushed me to be what I am today,
And as I write you this, I show my dismay,
I’m lost at the fact that you think my stories aren’t true
When you where there you were dressed in blue,

Your head was bleeding,
Ryan was sitting crying and eating,
I sat next to you trying to help you mend,
But you didn’t want to live on another’s lend,

So I’m sorry to tell you,
That no matter what you do,
I'm not going to forgive you,
but I'll always be there for you,

When no one is going to let you cry,
I'll be the one to watch you die,
Only I wish I could tell you,
That even to this day, I LOVE YOU.

Yet your ears are closed,
And now my heart is closed too,
For this poem isnt for you,
Its for everyone to know my feelings are true. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 6 [informant] => icryblacktearz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
For.The.Last.Time.

Contributed by icryblacktearz on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:18:50 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Now again I have lived another year,
Yet again, I’m living in fear,
I thought that I could face you,
But this is something that I may never do,

How can you hurt the ones you love,
The ones that God has sent you from above,
As I sit alone by myself, crying away my tears,
Does it make you see through your own fears?

Its gone by so fast,
With a childhood in the past,
To your husband I was a whore,
But he never made me feel I could be more,

He pushed me to be what I am today,
And as I write you this, I show my dismay,
I’m lost at the fact that you think my stories aren’t true
When you where there you were dressed in blue,

Your head was bleeding,
Ryan was sitting crying and eating,
I sat next to you trying to help you mend,
But you didn’t want to live on another’s lend,

So I’m sorry to tell you,
That no matter what you do,
I'm not going to forgive you,
but I'll always be there for you,

When no one is going to let you cry,
I'll be the one to watch you die,
Only I wish I could tell you,
That even to this day, I LOVE YOU.

Yet your ears are closed,
And now my heart is closed too,
For this poem isnt for you,
Its for everyone to know my feelings are true.




Copyright © icryblacktearz ... [ 2004-01-07 10:18:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: For.The.Last.Time. (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:52:47 AM AEST
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Good poem, I can feel the heart pain, but at the same time the anger, good mix
Good write
Alec Fernandez


Re: For.The.Last.Time. (User Rating: 1 )
by LouisaMontagu on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 01:15:57 PM AEST
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F*k i felt everyword of that,,,
nice 1 4 first attempt


Louisa x


Re: For.The.Last.Time. (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 06:31:52 PM AEST
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Very heartfelt words. Great emotion in this.
Well done.
Larry


Re: For.The.Last.Time. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 07:38:54 PM AEST
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lindsay good poem it was sad i am always behind u hun
~Jenna~




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