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Paradise
Contributed by
monkey
on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 11:42:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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glistening yellow
sun
reflecting off
crystal clear
water
falling into
beautiful white
waterfalls
far beyond sight
touching
the crisp baby-blue
sky
bridge-like arched
rainbows
adding a splash
of color
here and there
the calling
of animals
hushes
as the sky darkens
gleaming stars
appearing
one by one
light rain falls
dampening
lush green
trees
all saftley resting
for the night
in the arms
of paradise
Copyright ©
monkey
... [
2004-01-06 23:42:02]
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Re: Paradise
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by MajesticPoet on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 11:46:28 PM AEST
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Very cool... How well the mind can work when it is just sitting there wondering what to do. :D Very cool. Almost felt like I was there.. Keep up the good work...
Majestic [www.your-poetry.com]
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Re: Paradise
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 01:09:06 AM AEST
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It must be tottaly awesome as I see thru your vision.
very good write!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Paradise
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 02:34:41 AM AEST
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| Beautifully painted..weldone..venkat |
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