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Array ( [sid] => 30920 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => His Haunting Touch [time] => 2004-01-06 18:22:55 [hometext] => *I wasn't going to post this poem but,then I thought of Joel knowing he would want me too....enjoy! [bodytext] => His Haunting Touch

Late at night when I'm a sleep
Down the stairs he slowly creeps to my room
His touch so harming I shudder in fear
Tears streeming down my face
I close my eyes to see if I'm dreaming
To find him hovered over me spreading me wide,
Thrusting once,twice holding back
The painful screams I plead for him to
Stop he only pushed harder I feel the
Uglyness of my body starting to show.
I see all around me the demons
With frighting faces grabbing me with their
Razor sharp nails stabbing me all over
Feeling my insides been torn away
I feel my soul start to die from his haunting touch,
Those fingers find my breasts squezzing them
Till he sees the pain in my eyes harshfully ***********************************
***********************************
Bitting on my lip trying to hold inside the terrified
Sobs and shaking of my body will this night end?
How much longer will I have to feel his haunting touch?
His breath starts to slow as he gets off
Leaving me there terrified,hurting,
Crying and dirty with shame digging under my skin
Pulling the sheet over my body shutting
Out the world shutting out his haunting touch
Hoping to dissapear in to the cold world
That lies ahead of me.

©Care
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 13 [informant] => carebear [notes] => ...........some content deemed by site rules not suitable for general viewing......Edited by mod_6.......06-01-04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

His Haunting Touch

Contributed by carebear on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 06:22:55 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

His Haunting Touch

Late at night when I'm a sleep
Down the stairs he slowly creeps to my room
His touch so harming I shudder in fear
Tears streeming down my face
I close my eyes to see if I'm dreaming
To find him hovered over me spreading me wide,
Thrusting once,twice holding back
The painful screams I plead for him to
Stop he only pushed harder I feel the
Uglyness of my body starting to show.
I see all around me the demons
With frighting faces grabbing me with their
Razor sharp nails stabbing me all over
Feeling my insides been torn away
I feel my soul start to die from his haunting touch,
Those fingers find my breasts squezzing them
Till he sees the pain in my eyes harshfully ***********************************
***********************************
Bitting on my lip trying to hold inside the terrified
Sobs and shaking of my body will this night end?
How much longer will I have to feel his haunting touch?
His breath starts to slow as he gets off
Leaving me there terrified,hurting,
Crying and dirty with shame digging under my skin
Pulling the sheet over my body shutting
Out the world shutting out his haunting touch
Hoping to dissapear in to the cold world
That lies ahead of me.

©Care

Copyright Â© carebear ... [ 2004-01-06 18:22:55]
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Re: His Haunting Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 05:42:07 PM AEST
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Ouch. People who do things like that deserve to be stabbed with an ice pick then have a feeding tube stuck in the hole and have their insides sucked out and tossed in a blender to be fed right back into them. Sick frickin' people.

Re: His Haunting Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 05:42:24 PM AEST
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Ack. It was a good write though.

Re: His Haunting Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 03:04:07 AM AEST
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i know joel... and he'd be right... you should alway post your work, no matter what type of content it holds. all stories need to be told... i wish you would find my archive, then pm me with the entire poem, i'd love to read what was edited out. keep writting... this was really heartening!

Re: His Haunting Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:58:43 PM AEST
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this is such a powerful read, shame the evil mod edited a poem, i hate it when works of art are slated by evil mods. Anyway, this is a powerful peace, and I can relate to it. Keep up the good work!

Alec Fernandez

Re: His Haunting Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:20:43 PM AEST
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great poem.. i would love if you would send me the unedited version.. if thats not a trouble to you.. take care.. AMI JO

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