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Look down my nose at wot u can B
Your dark and twisted, the coldest Night
Too right you want to stay n fight!
There is no battle, its over I won
Who knew how shallow u'd become,
You turn my stomach! u make me bleed
And on this pain ur illness feeds
Get out my face! I Wont Forget
I'd love to kill u!! with no regret
To inflick such pain as u have to me
No Physical damage Its Mental u see!!!
Im angry, Im mad I've lost the plot
In my heart is where you Rott
No blood on my fingers I dont have to kill
Revenge is sweeter,, Its part of the thrill
You brought these, This Love and Hate
To be messed up WAS That UR FATE?
I love u, I HATE u, I love u, I Do
Now to finish Both us too!!!
One more time get close to me, we have the knives
In this together, Take both our Lives..!!!!!!! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 13 [informant] => LouisaMontagu [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Turned On You!!!!!

Contributed by LouisaMontagu on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 11:26:27 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You make me Sick! u disgust me!
Look down my nose at wot u can B
Your dark and twisted, the coldest Night
Too right you want to stay n fight!
There is no battle, its over I won
Who knew how shallow u'd become,
You turn my stomach! u make me bleed
And on this pain ur illness feeds
Get out my face! I Wont Forget
I'd love to kill u!! with no regret
To inflick such pain as u have to me
No Physical damage Its Mental u see!!!
Im angry, Im mad I've lost the plot
In my heart is where you Rott
No blood on my fingers I dont have to kill
Revenge is sweeter,, Its part of the thrill
You brought these, This Love and Hate
To be messed up WAS That UR FATE?
I love u, I HATE u, I love u, I Do
Now to finish Both us too!!!
One more time get close to me, we have the knives
In this together, Take both our Lives..!!!!!!!

Copyright © LouisaMontagu ... [ 2004-01-06 11:26:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Turned On You!!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 04:44:17 PM AEST
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Great venting ... very well written ... Jan

Re: Turned On You!!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:10:38 PM AEST
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Ouch... I'd hate to be on the recieving end of that. I take it this was about an x? Very good write. Lots of power in it.

Re: Turned On You!!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 03:24:14 PM AEST
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powerful write, very powerful, I like...
Not sure If this is the one I inspired you to write, but its brilliant anyways!
Alec Fernandez

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