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[aid] => mick
[title] => My lifes problems!
[time] => 2004-01-06 01:28:35
[hometext] => things are really rough right now,so I wrote this!
[bodytext] => Theres so much going on in my life,
Oh where do I begin,
some of these problems cut like a knife.
makes me feel I'll never win,
Sometimes things will all work out,
like everythings just fine,
then I will just scream & shout,
I want to loose my mind,
Pregnant with my first daughter on the way,
and I've been sick with a cold,
Two boys who fight every day,
it just never gets old,
The boys are sick and fevers too,
my strength is totally gone,
will I make it through,
will this stress continue on?
A husband with a bad back and in pain,
not able to work for days,
waiting on surgery,is driving us insane,
in so many ways,
Owning your own truck,just doesnt pay,
if hes not working no money we will see,
so the bills will sit here for days,
then what will happen to the kids & me,
You just never know when things will get rough,
it may just happen one day,
then it starts to get tough,
trying to catch up along the way,
One day, you think everythings going grand,
and happy at the thought,
then it just slips through your hand,
so be happy with what you got,
So many things to be happy about,
but now theres things that make me sad,
We want to scream & shout,
about the glory that we had,
Things cant always go your way,
life would be to easy to live,
never any problems to face the day,
now that God would never give!
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[informant] => lowman613
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My lifes problems!
Contributed by
lowman613
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Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 01:28:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Theres so much going on in my life,
Oh where do I begin,
some of these problems cut like a knife.
makes me feel I'll never win,
Sometimes things will all work out,
like everythings just fine,
then I will just scream & shout,
I want to loose my mind,
Pregnant with my first daughter on the way,
and I've been sick with a cold,
Two boys who fight every day,
it just never gets old,
The boys are sick and fevers too,
my strength is totally gone,
will I make it through,
will this stress continue on?
A husband with a bad back and in pain,
not able to work for days,
waiting on surgery,is driving us insane,
in so many ways,
Owning your own truck,just doesnt pay,
if hes not working no money we will see,
so the bills will sit here for days,
then what will happen to the kids & me,
You just never know when things will get rough,
it may just happen one day,
then it starts to get tough,
trying to catch up along the way,
One day, you think everythings going grand,
and happy at the thought,
then it just slips through your hand,
so be happy with what you got,
So many things to be happy about,
but now theres things that make me sad,
We want to scream & shout,
about the glory that we had,
Things cant always go your way,
life would be to easy to live,
never any problems to face the day,
now that God would never give!
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lowman613
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Re: My lifes problems!
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 01:37:49 AM AEST
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Oh bless your heart my dear friend.
Sounds to me like you are so tired you don't know which end you are on or even care. Now that I'm 66, almost 67, I look back, and will share.....all the things that looked so bleak, and all the things I worried about for more than a week.....look here I am, and everything turned out just fine....and it will for you too! You just constantly have to remind...He loves you, He cares for you, and he will never allow any burden to get you down. Think positive now, if this is a test on your faith....lean heavily on him....he'll never forsake....if you can put your coat on, and leave....just take a walk, if it's not too hard for you to breathe in the cold air....You're going to be just fine....just throw your burden on him, and don't take it back again! He'll see you through, I promise....and he promises too!
Warm Love,
Wish I was closer, I'd help you with your boys...then you could rest awhile.
ConSue
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Re: My lifes problems!
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 01:48:39 AM AEST
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I hear u.....lovingcritters already said it all.
Very good venting!
as eternal beings of light we should jus be thankfull.
U know i found a key one day as I was nearly insane I jus started praising God, little did I know at the time that praising God it took Satans power off me..........then my patience was rewarded.
God will bless u 4 this praise.
peace, joy, luv, huggs,
emy
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Re: My lifes problems!
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 01:54:22 AM AEST
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wow this is very stressed out poem.. i can totally understand it.. life can get very stressfull.. but like i say it will make you a stronger wiser person.. everything will be ok in the end.. hang in there great job i really liked this poem its a great expresson of stressing
peace joy and hope
JENNA
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Re: My lifes problems!
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 02:08:39 AM AEST
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dear friend Christina!.. you are facing many problems with your inner strength. may Lord bless you with soul force..I hope every thing will be alright soon by the grace of God.
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Re: My lifes problems!
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 10:01:26 AM AEST
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wow, I guess everyone's life has problems though, but family problems are the worst exspecially when things get as bad a you say, but remember for every bad thing there will always be something good, and even though time isnt on your side, it will happen soon...And thats comming from like the worlds greatest pessamist
Great Write
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Re: My lifes problems!
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 11:38:35 AM AEST
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Christina,
Im sorry that things are going so hard on you right now, I can relate to all your speaking of here. Owning our own trucks I know the finacial end of this as well. If we were closer we would run the truck for you for a couple months lol at least the wheels would be turning right?? I understand the stress with the money, I got fired three weeks ago and Gary has been off work over a week now. So instead of us worrying ourselfs to death lets eat some homemade chicken noodle soup and rest knowing that this bad time too will pass.If needed write me.Hugs
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Re: My lifes problems!
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:05:44 PM AEST
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| Just hang in. Things could start looking up tomorrow. Sometimes you just gotta hang on that extra day and if takes one more just hang in there. Things have a funny way of working themselves out. If you ever need to talk you can e-mail me. |
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