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And the fears of new tomorrows
She hears his voice, and will gladly borrow
The time they have, and she makes the choice

She sees him as a crystal bloom
His beauty reflecting in the moon
She reaches out to touch him still
And desire's victory has won the will

She hears the echo of an emerald breeze
His kisses bring her down to her knees
Furtive rainbows make the clouds rejoice
For the time they have, and she makes the choice

Consumed by flooding rivers of love
She rides the waves from up above
Their passion breathes as time stands still
And desire's victory has won the will
My desire's victory has won her will [comments] => 3 [counter] => 140 [topic] => 2 [informant] => PoeticReign [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

DESIRE'S VICTORY

Contributed by PoeticReign on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 12:56:09 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Her tears have tasted the sorrows
And the fears of new tomorrows
She hears his voice, and will gladly borrow
The time they have, and she makes the choice

She sees him as a crystal bloom
His beauty reflecting in the moon
She reaches out to touch him still
And desire's victory has won the will

She hears the echo of an emerald breeze
His kisses bring her down to her knees
Furtive rainbows make the clouds rejoice
For the time they have, and she makes the choice

Consumed by flooding rivers of love
She rides the waves from up above
Their passion breathes as time stands still
And desire's victory has won the will
My desire's victory has won her will

Copyright © PoeticReign ... [ 2004-01-06 00:56:09]
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Re: DESIRE'S VICTORY (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 01:19:13 AM AEST
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Good images..nicely written.. venkat

Re: DESIRE'S VICTORY (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 01:58:36 AM AEST
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WOW!!! I really like this one,good write.

Re: DESIRE'S VICTORY (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:07:36 PM AEST
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I can see why you cherish this poem so much. The feelings are so strong, and the rhyme makes it flow smoothly.

"She hears the echo of an emerald breeze
His kisses bring her down to her knees"

Pure gold....

Truly,
-V.S.

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