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How to Paint an Angel Black

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 09:36:41 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



How do you paint an angel black?
You must know 'cause I'm dead at your hands
You did this to me
You made me this way
I'd smash your face in if I could
But you'd hit me ten times harder

Why do you break me and murder my soul
Then say you're sorry like that makes it okay?
I'll let you into my head if you want
If you really wanna know how I feel

I feel like I hate you for what you do to me
I used to be happy
Now I'm locked here in your half dead heart
I feel like putting you where you always put me
Helplessly on your knees
Now I'll cut you up till you look like me

Why do I hurt myself that way?
'Cause it takes away the pain you cause
You do this to me
Your hand's on the knife
Did you know I almost did it?
Almost ended it all for good

Took just enough pills to put me to sleep
'Cause I thought maybe you'd learn and things would change
But now I'm questioning everything
Would I breathe easier if I stopped holding on?

**** YOU for making me feel this way
**** YOU for all the angry things you say
**** YOU for the times you push me around
**** YOU from my grave in the ground

I never used to hate like I do
I never used to feel how I do
I never used to dress like I do
And it's ALL BECAUSE OF YOU

I'll cut out your heart with my hands
Cut out my own and die by your side
'Cause I need this, I'm bound to you
The darkness you bring
I breathe it in
And think how much more comfortable it is
Than all the bright lights
All the happiness in the world
Couldn't pull me away from you

How do you paint an angel black?
You kill her till she's just like me




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2004-01-05 21:36:41]
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Re: How to Paint an Angel Black (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 09:57:03 PM AEST
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WOW!!! That is what I can say. Reading that I could almost see the thoughts going through your mind while you where putting it all down. The pain in your eyes, and the terror in your mind. Very good poem. I would hate to be the YOU in that poem.. I like it.. Very well done, very passionate.

Majestic


Re: How to Paint an Angel Black (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 02:04:14 AM AEST
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wow i really felt the anger and the emptyness and hate in this one .. I can relate to this .. my ex made me feel that way also.. awesome write.. this is one of the best angry poems i have ever read.. awesome JOB!!

peace joy and hope
JENNA


Re: How to Paint an Angel Black (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 10:18:53 AM AEST
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If I interpreted it write, I've experienced the same kinda pain, and humiliation, and I can totally see where your anger is comming from, Keep up the good work and bring out more excellent poetry like this!

Alec Fernandez


Re: How to Paint an Angel Black (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 12:41:29 PM AEST
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Very good written. I loved the way you made the approach revealing more and more the pain and anguish someone caused you *Bad person BAD!* , the burst of anger and the relative ‘cooling’ at the end making that thoughtful comment really hits the spot!. Really great work!


Re: How to Paint an Angel Black (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 05:40:49 PM AEST
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Roll on with it doll. Lot's of anger ye be venting yes? Loved this. Abso*****lutely. Just ripped into it from the feeling of it. I even loved the title.


Re: How to Paint an Angel Black (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 11:31:32 PM AEST
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ouchies!! extra big huggers dee, crikey kiddo, great venting, love nessa xx


Re: How to Paint an Angel Black (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 11:47:14 PM AEST
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Venting is good for the soul, and your soul should be vented as hell after this one!! Very well written, such rage!
Well done
Larry


Re: How to Paint an Angel Black (User Rating: 1 )
by JT on Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:24:32 AM AEST
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Powerful. Capturing all that anger. You can feel the hurt when you read it. Cant wait to read more.




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