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Array ( [sid] => 30826 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Where is this war? [time] => 2004-01-05 17:44:17 [hometext] => My deep thoughts of the war and my current state of mind. [bodytext] => Life at times seems no bigger than an baby's thumb/
Peace at times seems infant, small and dumb/
This wars in the middle east yet we have no tanks in the ghetto's blocks/
Constant killing there too, yet the only troops there are the few cops/
We must unite these nations, so peace can grow/
Villians always shatter to death, Saddam should know/
If the men of terror could only learn to surrender/
We can throw down these mental defenses, be a little less tender/
Dictators start with nothing but evil intentions and feel only dirt/
Democracy, the true way, but these nations are hard to convert/
Everyone's stubborn, stuck in their own ways/
This alone is gonna cause future d-days/
The people dont so why should the congress ignore/
Gang and street battles, where is this war? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Lord-Fatal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Where is this war?

Contributed by Lord-Fatal on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 05:44:17 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Life at times seems no bigger than an baby's thumb/
Peace at times seems infant, small and dumb/
This wars in the middle east yet we have no tanks in the ghetto's blocks/
Constant killing there too, yet the only troops there are the few cops/
We must unite these nations, so peace can grow/
Villians always shatter to death, Saddam should know/
If the men of terror could only learn to surrender/
We can throw down these mental defenses, be a little less tender/
Dictators start with nothing but evil intentions and feel only dirt/
Democracy, the true way, but these nations are hard to convert/
Everyone's stubborn, stuck in their own ways/
This alone is gonna cause future d-days/
The people dont so why should the congress ignore/
Gang and street battles, where is this war?

Copyright © Lord-Fatal ... [ 2004-01-05 17:44:17]
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Re: Where is this war? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 07:35:03 PM AEST
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Kind of goes with the "let he who be blameless cast the first stone" type theme--- first a nation must correct injustice within itself before correcting injustices elsewhere..... a nice point in the debate..... and very true....
Nice write (and might I say, the rhyming was well done. It didn't over power the message, and wasn't too sing-songy either....)
Thanks for sharing =)

God bless,
Ellen

Re: Where is this war? (User Rating: 1 )
by BEE on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 12:29:32 AM AEST
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VERY NICE LOVED HOW IT WENT

PS GET AT SOME OF MINE

BEE

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