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Array ( [sid] => 30816 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lonely Road [time] => 2004-01-05 16:13:00 [hometext] => I wrote this a few days ago some things apply to me and my ex Jason [bodytext] =>
What a lonely road they walk
Hand in Hand
Only each other
A seeming love that cannot be matched
Longing for each others touch

The world envys everything they do
The way they live for each other
The way they make love under a canopy of stars
Seeming so happy, so content with life

But they look into each others eyes
A cloudiness looms within
An uncertainty for their true feelings

What a lonely road they walk

With his words he pushed her away
Leaving her to walk the road alone
Nothing left for her to live for

Another broken heart
Another slit wrist
Another lonely soul caught in loves trap, doomed to wander alone until the end of time
Another fragile being stung by oh so bitter words

Remind me what we're living for

What a lonely road we are doomed to walk [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 22 [informant] => night_child [notes] => .........checked by mod_6......05-01-04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Lonely Road

Contributed by night_child on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 04:13:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

What a lonely road they walk
Hand in Hand
Only each other
A seeming love that cannot be matched
Longing for each others touch

The world envys everything they do
The way they live for each other
The way they make love under a canopy of stars
Seeming so happy, so content with life

But they look into each others eyes
A cloudiness looms within
An uncertainty for their true feelings

What a lonely road they walk

With his words he pushed her away
Leaving her to walk the road alone
Nothing left for her to live for

Another broken heart
Another slit wrist
Another lonely soul caught in loves trap, doomed to wander alone until the end of time
Another fragile being stung by oh so bitter words

Remind me what we're living for

What a lonely road we are doomed to walk

Copyright © night_child ... [ 2004-01-05 16:13:00]
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Re: Lonely Road (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 07:44:56 PM AEST
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Oh wow, this was amazing...... so very well done...... (at a loss for words-- usually I have longer comments, but now I dont know what to say. Just that this was simply breath-taking..... and if I, the queen of gab, am at a loss for words, you know it's well done.....lol)

God bless,
Ellen

Re: Lonely Road (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 03:13:11 PM AEST
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this was a great romantic but sad poem Great write

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