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Array ( [sid] => 30811 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Melissa's Poem #3 (Melissa's Lament) [time] => 2004-01-05 14:59:08 [hometext] => If only I had a true friend... [bodytext] => Everyone keeps bothering me, they won't let me be,
I look up to God and ask,"Why me?"
I lock myself in my room and sit down on my bed.
I hate my life..would I be better off dead?

My head hurts from crying; I can't take the pain,
I hate my life; I'm going insane.
My eyes are burning as I lay, crying in my bed,
There are too many things, going on in my head.

I hate my family, nothing I do is ever good enough,
I try my best to do well, my friends say my life's not that tough.
Sure, I have my health and I'm really smart,
But I feel my life is falling apart.

I don't have many friends, I'm overweight,
I sure don't love things more than I hate.
My sister's a *****, I hate her too.
She curses and hits me, and treats me like I'm two.

No one understands how much pain I'm in,
I wish someone did..just one true friend.
Someone who could right now be nice to me
And hold me tight and comfort me.

Someone to wipe my tears away whenever I cry.
But there's no one like that and I wonder why?
I'm filled with hurt, anger, and confusion inside.
Far to often at this point I'll consider suicide.

It seems like it's the perfect escape from my pain.
I jhave nothing to lose, tho, nothing to gain.
One simple task to end my life.
Will it be a gun? pills? poison? or a knife?

But killing myself is too harsh. I'd never do that.
Just because I hate my family, my life, my fat.
And no one can help me..I wonder why?
So until I find out, I'll just sit here and cry... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 48 [informant] => norm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Melissa's Poem #3 (Melissa's Lament)

Contributed by norm on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 02:59:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Everyone keeps bothering me, they won't let me be,
I look up to God and ask,"Why me?"
I lock myself in my room and sit down on my bed.
I hate my life..would I be better off dead?

My head hurts from crying; I can't take the pain,
I hate my life; I'm going insane.
My eyes are burning as I lay, crying in my bed,
There are too many things, going on in my head.

I hate my family, nothing I do is ever good enough,
I try my best to do well, my friends say my life's not that tough.
Sure, I have my health and I'm really smart,
But I feel my life is falling apart.

I don't have many friends, I'm overweight,
I sure don't love things more than I hate.
My sister's a *****, I hate her too.
She curses and hits me, and treats me like I'm two.

No one understands how much pain I'm in,
I wish someone did..just one true friend.
Someone who could right now be nice to me
And hold me tight and comfort me.

Someone to wipe my tears away whenever I cry.
But there's no one like that and I wonder why?
I'm filled with hurt, anger, and confusion inside.
Far to often at this point I'll consider suicide.

It seems like it's the perfect escape from my pain.
I jhave nothing to lose, tho, nothing to gain.
One simple task to end my life.
Will it be a gun? pills? poison? or a knife?

But killing myself is too harsh. I'd never do that.
Just because I hate my family, my life, my fat.
And no one can help me..I wonder why?
So until I find out, I'll just sit here and cry...




Copyright © norm ... [ 2004-01-05 14:59:08]
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Re: Melissa's Poem #3 (Melissa's Lament) (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 02:14:20 AM AEST
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Dear Melissa,
I'm amazed at your talent! Each time I read one of your poems, I can feel your emotions, your heartfelt tones. I'm so amazed because I know this isn't really you....how are you able to completely undo YOU? Wonderful gift....keep up the good work, I'm so glad you are happy, and this is not true.
lovingly
ConSue


Re: Melissa's Poem #3 (Melissa's Lament) (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 12:06:01 PM AEST
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You really know how to get that emotion out in your poetry thats great work! Well done! Christina




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