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memories past, none forgot.
Gentle visions fresher than air
for in my dreams you live there.
I see you smile, I hear your laugh
your sweet smell shall always last.
I feel your touch as before
holding me forever more.
Side by side as meant to be
your hand in mine, guiding me.
Inner peace where it belongs
in my visions beating strong.
Silent tears from the soul
hidden deep so they won't flow.
Reality wants control of you
my thoughts, my dreams, my visions too.
Yet, tightly closed my eyes shall stay
for you must never fade away.
And if sometimes I must glance
at life's hope of second chance,
my dreams will never fade away
so by my side you will stay.
As was meant, you'll always be
hand in hand, guiding me.

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Side by Side

Contributed by eternal_sorrows on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 04:31:23 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Brisk of a moment, flash of a thought
memories past, none forgot.
Gentle visions fresher than air
for in my dreams you live there.
I see you smile, I hear your laugh
your sweet smell shall always last.
I feel your touch as before
holding me forever more.
Side by side as meant to be
your hand in mine, guiding me.
Inner peace where it belongs
in my visions beating strong.
Silent tears from the soul
hidden deep so they won't flow.
Reality wants control of you
my thoughts, my dreams, my visions too.
Yet, tightly closed my eyes shall stay
for you must never fade away.
And if sometimes I must glance
at life's hope of second chance,
my dreams will never fade away
so by my side you will stay.
As was meant, you'll always be
hand in hand, guiding me.

Copyright © eternal_sorrows ... [ 2004-01-05 04:31:23]
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Re: Side by Side (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 06:31:50 AM AEST
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that kind of love lasts lifetimes........

Re: Side by Side (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 06:44:11 AM AEST
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Lovely write.... He will never leave you.....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Side by Side (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 07:31:55 AM AEST
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so sad.....a lovelly right though.....a very good one too.

Re: Side by Side (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 08:15:02 AM AEST
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wow, seriously that was such a lovely emotional poem, it all most made me cry!!!
(Yes I am a guy, no I'm not gay, I'm just in touch with my emotions :))

Re: Side by Side (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 02:42:06 PM AEST
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My heart goes out to you. A lovely poem.

Kie

Re: Side by Side (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 05:11:47 PM AEST
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A heartfelt beautiful write ... Jan

Re: Side by Side (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 02:27:49 AM AEST
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Oh how loyal, how sad, how loving, and true.
I lost my husband too, and could never express my feeling such as you! It was so painful, I knew if I ever did, I'd die just trying to undo.
You are very courgeous, and open with your view...and you are right , he will never leave you. My husband died 32 going on 33 years ago, and there's never been a day, fast or slow, I don't think of him, and know, I loved him so!
I wish I could hug you....I know where your love is headed...it will never leave, nor will he!
Lovingly,
lovingcritters
consue
Beautiful poetry!

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