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Array ( [sid] => 30679 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Her Master Piece [time] => 2004-01-03 16:41:06 [hometext] => read if u dare (I think this may be triggering) [bodytext] =>
The silence of her beauty marks
Each one has its own reason of beauty
A delicate line once bloddy and ozzing,
Now forever a light pink line acrossed her arm
To her a master piece of her beautiful art
No shame she feels just ugly and pain
Nothing to gain,nothing to lose only to take
The simple slice of her razor blade.
Her knees pressed tightly against her chest
A shinning of the moonbeams pool around
Her frailed body only reflecting the sliver of tears sliding
Down her pail,cold face each tear landing
Apon her scars one after another she makes her
Special secret,special wish none of them are
Said from her silent cracked lips.
Slipping in to bed her fluffy white cloud
Laying still glacing at the stars to see
Them dripping down knowing that these
Are her wishes coming true her cracked lips
Form a slight smile of joy,her beauty marks
Scream for more glamour to add to
Her beauty her master piece her art.
©Care"04" [comments] => 4 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 13 [informant] => carebear [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Her Master Piece

Contributed by carebear on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 04:41:06 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry




The silence of her beauty marks
Each one has its own reason of beauty
A delicate line once bloddy and ozzing,
Now forever a light pink line acrossed her arm
To her a master piece of her beautiful art
No shame she feels just ugly and pain
Nothing to gain,nothing to lose only to take
The simple slice of her razor blade.
Her knees pressed tightly against her chest
A shinning of the moonbeams pool around
Her frailed body only reflecting the sliver of tears sliding
Down her pail,cold face each tear landing
Apon her scars one after another she makes her
Special secret,special wish none of them are
Said from her silent cracked lips.
Slipping in to bed her fluffy white cloud
Laying still glacing at the stars to see
Them dripping down knowing that these
Are her wishes coming true her cracked lips
Form a slight smile of joy,her beauty marks
Scream for more glamour to add to
Her beauty her master piece her art.
©Care"04"




Copyright © carebear ... [ 2004-01-03 16:41:06]
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Re: Her Master Piece (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 04:48:07 PM AEST
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So very well written, mesmerizing...too bad she finds beauty in this...for the true beauty lies deep within her soul

Shari


Re: Her Master Piece (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 04:48:55 PM AEST
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Awesome write....
Jenni


Re: Her Master Piece (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 05:01:24 PM AEST
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i'm sorry to say but people really get joy out of cutting themsleves...I have before! And you have put it very well! And yes the scares are beautiful because they a story of her life. Nice poem! Love:::Kirby


Re: Her Master Piece (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 06:35:17 PM AEST
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I try to never read poems like this because I deal with this so much at work. I will say the poem was beautifully written. Some people have emotional scarring on the inside and others have triggers that help them hurt themselves on the outside.

Kie




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