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Array ( [sid] => 30665 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Melissa's Poem #2 - The Suicide Note [time] => 2004-01-03 10:56:14 [hometext] => This suicide note is written to my parents.. [bodytext] => Dear Mom and Dad,

First of all you need to know that this is not your fault,
It's mine, for I locked my problem inside me like a vault,
Problems that I was never able to tell you,
Problems that I'm sick of dealing with. I'm through.

I'm sick of pretending that everything's alright,
I'm sick of having all these emotional demons to fight.
I can't take my depressing life anymore,
I realize I felt this way too often before.

I now know I'm not needed in this place,
Just another stupid teen, just another ugly face.
I can tell I'm secretly hated by everyone I know,
Though, when I'm around, they don't let their hatred show.

My life has no purpose as I can clearly see,
No one needs me and everyone hates me
I hate this world I live in, I hate how I feel now.
I try so hard to be accepted, but I don't know how.

I hate my reputation..a fat loser..a slut
So I'm ending my life, my wrists I will cut.
I want you two to know, that I really do love you,
But I hate my life too much, this is the only thing to do.

Suicide's the perfect escape for my problems to go away,
I don't think anyone will miss me, anyway.
Maybe, somewhere there's someone who loves me
But I couldn't find them soon enough so now I must flee.

Maybe, my life's not that bad, maybe this is all in my head.
But it's too late to tell me that, by the time you find thid I'll be dead.
I'm sorry it has to end this way, I'm sorry if you cry,
But I think this world will be better off, If I die..Goodbye.

PS:I'm sorry I had all this depression to hide,
If you want to see me, you'll find my body outside. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 39 [informant] => norm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Melissa's Poem #2 - The Suicide Note

Contributed by norm on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 10:56:14 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief



Dear Mom and Dad,

First of all you need to know that this is not your fault,
It's mine, for I locked my problem inside me like a vault,
Problems that I was never able to tell you,
Problems that I'm sick of dealing with. I'm through.

I'm sick of pretending that everything's alright,
I'm sick of having all these emotional demons to fight.
I can't take my depressing life anymore,
I realize I felt this way too often before.

I now know I'm not needed in this place,
Just another stupid teen, just another ugly face.
I can tell I'm secretly hated by everyone I know,
Though, when I'm around, they don't let their hatred show.

My life has no purpose as I can clearly see,
No one needs me and everyone hates me
I hate this world I live in, I hate how I feel now.
I try so hard to be accepted, but I don't know how.

I hate my reputation..a fat loser..a slut
So I'm ending my life, my wrists I will cut.
I want you two to know, that I really do love you,
But I hate my life too much, this is the only thing to do.

Suicide's the perfect escape for my problems to go away,
I don't think anyone will miss me, anyway.
Maybe, somewhere there's someone who loves me
But I couldn't find them soon enough so now I must flee.

Maybe, my life's not that bad, maybe this is all in my head.
But it's too late to tell me that, by the time you find thid I'll be dead.
I'm sorry it has to end this way, I'm sorry if you cry,
But I think this world will be better off, If I die..Goodbye.

PS:I'm sorry I had all this depression to hide,
If you want to see me, you'll find my body outside.




Copyright © norm ... [ 2004-01-03 10:56:14]
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Re: Melissa's Poem #2 - The Suicide Note (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 10:58:36 AM AEST
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Please understand..Melissa is my granddaughter and is strictly responsible for this (unedited by me) write...


Re: Melissa's Poem #2 - The Suicide Note (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 11:49:05 AM AEST
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ooops.. this sounds so scary,
this sounds so cruely sad!
tears in my eyes i am having
Imagining, it would be my child
My God , all of us came for purpose
we were given life,
we must live
I wish I could hug and love this soul
who thinks, has no purpose to live!!! aika:-)


Re: Melissa's Poem #2 - The Suicide Note (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 04:59:45 PM AEST
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Poem well done..I hope I never get to read a note like this...
Jenni


Re: Melissa's Poem #2 - The Suicide Note (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 12:07:27 AM AEST
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Hi There Melissa, remember me, this is Connie, and just finished reading your poem for the fourth time. It's so real, it gives me goosebumps....I surely hope you are not planning to inact any of this through! You'd never know by me...it sounded so real and so true.
Your poetry is great Melissa, I really enjoy it, but the poetry I like best is not sad, nor dark...so this one I would put second to your other.
But well written anyway,
Lovingly,
Lovingcritters
Connie Sue


Re: Melissa's Poem #2 - The Suicide Note (User Rating: 1 )
by StarBeneathTheStairs on Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 04:06:36 AM AEST
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This poem brought tears to my eyes, mainly because it reminds me of my best friend and what she's been through...
This was well written and I hope that whoever wrote this has overcame this depressing part of their life.

Big hugs,
Kassie




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