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Array ( [sid] => 30659 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Déšť mi psal - The rain wrote message to me [time] => 2004-01-03 06:08:52 [hometext] => Two language poem.... [bodytext] => Ležím doma v posteli
Nemoc mě sklátila
Přemýšlím,kde jste všichni vy,
A proč tam nejsem já

Projdu se k oknu,
Byl žhavý letní den
A teď k večeru
Na obloze mraky jen

Náhle se snesl jako modlitba
déšť zprvu jemný,
okna se dotýkám,
prahnu po tom, co uvidím

Jak krásně roztančily se kapky
Na okno mi píšou vzkaz
Čekáme tě, pršíme tady
Pojď sem tančit mezi nás

Slza po tváři stekla,
Odepsala dešti
Tak ráda bych k vám vběhla
Jsem sevřená,jak v kleštích

Minulý týden jsme si hráli
Tys dešti milióny vzkazů psal
Na mé tělo, šaty smáčel
A z výšky ses na mě smál

Jen je mi teď o moc krásněji
Pršíš, cítím tě na těle
Tvé teplé kapky
Píšou dál na okno – uzdrav se

I am at home in the bed
Disease laid me down
Thinking where you went
And why could not go I

Walking to the window
It was a hot summer day
Now, in the late afternoon
Only clouds in the sky

Suddenly as a prayer
First so soft rain descended
Touching the window
I covet what I´ll see

The drops so lovely dancing
On my window writing a message
„waiting for you, we are raining,
come on, dance with us,girly“

Tear falling down my cheeks
To the rain replied
I am gripped in vice of diseas
So gladly I would go out

Last week we played
You wrote millions messages
On my body, soaked my dress
And from the hight smiled at me

Now, I am feeling so much better
You´re raining, I feel you on me
Your warm drops
Writing on the window – get well soon, girly

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Aika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => czech [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
Déšť mi psal - The rain wrote message to me

Contributed by Aika on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 06:08:52 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



Ležím doma v posteli
Nemoc mě sklátila
Přemýšlím,kde jste všichni vy,
A proč tam nejsem já

Projdu se k oknu,
Byl žhavý letní den
A teď k večeru
Na obloze mraky jen

Náhle se snesl jako modlitba
déšť zprvu jemný,
okna se dotýkám,
prahnu po tom, co uvidím

Jak krásně roztančily se kapky
Na okno mi píšou vzkaz
Čekáme tě, pršíme tady
Pojď sem tančit mezi nás

Slza po tváři stekla,
Odepsala dešti
Tak ráda bych k vám vběhla
Jsem sevřená,jak v kleštích

Minulý týden jsme si hráli
Tys dešti milióny vzkazů psal
Na mé tělo, šaty smáčel
A z výšky ses na mě smál

Jen je mi teď o moc krásněji
Pršíš, cítím tě na těle
Tvé teplé kapky
Píšou dál na okno – uzdrav se

I am at home in the bed
Disease laid me down
Thinking where you went
And why could not go I

Walking to the window
It was a hot summer day
Now, in the late afternoon
Only clouds in the sky

Suddenly as a prayer
First so soft rain descended
Touching the window
I covet what I´ll see

The drops so lovely dancing
On my window writing a message
„waiting for you, we are raining,
come on, dance with us,girly“

Tear falling down my cheeks
To the rain replied
I am gripped in vice of diseas
So gladly I would go out

Last week we played
You wrote millions messages
On my body, soaked my dress
And from the hight smiled at me

Now, I am feeling so much better
You´re raining, I feel you on me
Your warm drops
Writing on the window – get well soon, girly





Copyright © Aika ... [ 2004-01-03 06:08:52]
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Re: Déšť mi psal - The rain wrote message to me (User Rating: 1 )
by maryetta on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 07:48:06 AM AEST
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i really enjoyed your poem, i almost felt i was next to you beconning to the rain drops.
maryetta


Re: Déšť mi psal - The rain wrote message to me (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 12:25:33 PM AEST
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What a soft, touching poem
-----------------------------------
I loved your poem, it's soft as silk
And poignant as is mother's milk,
The slightest touch of whimsy there,
For us to read and be aware...


Re: Déšť mi psal - The rain wrote message to me (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 12:00:42 AM AEST
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Aika,
This poem is so like you in everyway. No matter the time of day, or how you are feeling, you try always to see the light and enjoy the beauty that surrounds you!
Tiny droplets of rain, writing messages....Oh how inspiring....and such wonder in your mind and pen!
Lovely dear friend, just lovely!
ConSue


Re: Déšť mi psal - The rain wrote message to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 08:37:38 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this, Aika... even just reading your language was interesting...
My husband and I once had a Czech friend and I just loved listening to him talk...
Thanks for your comment on my last poem..
Jenni




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