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Array ( [sid] => 30629 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Im saving you [time] => 2004-01-02 21:47:14 [hometext] => Thanx for everyone who inspired this, some dont know it, but they help me write [bodytext] => There's a reason why I always lie
Shake my head and say I'm fine
I've already caused you enough pain
I dont want u to hav to go through it again
Coz there's a reason why I'm always scared
Why I often wonder why I was spared
Why I sometimes cant look you in the eye
Why I'm scared of most guys
But continue to fall in love with them
Where I was when I was ten
Why I cant fall asleep at night
Why I always seem to get into a fight
Why I'm so violent, why I'm so bad
The actual reason why I'm 'mad'
Its too late now, I've given in
As thoughts of the grave again come in [comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Bohemian_with_a_pen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Im saving you

Contributed by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 09:47:14 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

There's a reason why I always lie
Shake my head and say I'm fine
I've already caused you enough pain
I dont want u to hav to go through it again
Coz there's a reason why I'm always scared
Why I often wonder why I was spared
Why I sometimes cant look you in the eye
Why I'm scared of most guys
But continue to fall in love with them
Where I was when I was ten
Why I cant fall asleep at night
Why I always seem to get into a fight
Why I'm so violent, why I'm so bad
The actual reason why I'm 'mad'
Its too late now, I've given in
As thoughts of the grave again come in

Copyright © Bohemian_with_a_pen ... [ 2004-01-02 21:47:14]
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Re: Im saving you (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 12:24:37 PM AEST
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wow

Re: Im saving you (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 11:22:45 AM AEST
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This was such a good write. I dunno the story behind it but I don't really need to to see this has your heart and soul in it. Excellent. Bad dreams? So no sleep?

Re: Im saving you (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 03:47:15 AM AEST
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wow very definate i like this. personal poems are often the best because they come from the heart!

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