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Array ( [sid] => 3058 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Frozen Deppression Over You [time] => 2002-08-30 22:58:20 [hometext] => I really just couldn't find a topic, that I felt really fit this poem. Its about alot of ***** and its deep, filled with alot of emotion or so I think. But I'm just the poet , not the interpator.................................................. [bodytext] => Pain
Burns in the heart
Tears
Freeze in the eyelids
Because I do not
Feel any remorse
Broke your heart
Made you cry
You brought all
On yourself.

Silent
Little words
You uttered
Trying to get in my pants
For
Forever
But it never worked
Until
We started dating.

And then
It all went downhill
I didn't love you
I've never loved a girl
I've never been in love
But
I always get the girls
Who try to smother me
And need to be around me
All the time
And want a serious relationship
But
I'm to young
To be held down
In a comitted serious relationship
I'm just having my fun
Right now
And thats doesn't coincide
With the vibes
That you're giving me
They're saying
You want something serious
Even though
You say
You don't
But
I think you do
And just don't know it.

So
I hope you
Have fun
With your new man
Cheated on you
Twice
Hasn't he
And you keep taking him
Back
Well
You tried that
The whole cheating thing
And I left you sorry a$$
And you couldn't understand
Why
Know I understand
But
It wasn't just that
It was everything
But
Its all better now
Now that we're friends
And not lovers. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 43 [informant] => ml02 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Frozen Deppression Over You

Contributed by ml02 on Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 10:58:20 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Pain
Burns in the heart
Tears
Freeze in the eyelids
Because I do not
Feel any remorse
Broke your heart
Made you cry
You brought all
On yourself.

Silent
Little words
You uttered
Trying to get in my pants
For
Forever
But it never worked
Until
We started dating.

And then
It all went downhill
I didn't love you
I've never loved a girl
I've never been in love
But
I always get the girls
Who try to smother me
And need to be around me
All the time
And want a serious relationship
But
I'm to young
To be held down
In a comitted serious relationship
I'm just having my fun
Right now
And thats doesn't coincide
With the vibes
That you're giving me
They're saying
You want something serious
Even though
You say
You don't
But
I think you do
And just don't know it.

So
I hope you
Have fun
With your new man
Cheated on you
Twice
Hasn't he
And you keep taking him
Back
Well
You tried that
The whole cheating thing
And I left you sorry a$$
And you couldn't understand
Why
Know I understand
But
It wasn't just that
It was everything
But
Its all better now
Now that we're friends
And not lovers.




Copyright © ml02 ... [ 2002-08-30 22:58:20]
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Re: Frozen Deppression Over You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 06:31:47 AM AEST
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its better that way , to be friends instead of lovers. You both are not ready for a serious commitment, but it will come.
fine write




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