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Array ( [sid] => 30560 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Only Wish [time] => 2004-01-01 17:35:31 [hometext] => It's funny when you think you don't need anything else... and by the time you realize you do, it's too late. [bodytext] => Where is my angel?
It seems she's gone away
Left me in a game I cannot play
There's nothing I can do
I can't see past your face
And I feel like I'm falling from grace

Where is she now?
I need a little guidance
And someone who understands
I don't know how
I wound up at your mercy
None of this is what I planned

I look around me
How'd I get so alone?
I remember when your heart still shone
It shouldn't feel this way
I never thought it would
And if I let go it could be good

Where did she go?
Everything's so confusing
And I feel like I'm losing
I wish I'd known
I put my heart on the line
When I left them all behind

I only want someone to hold me
I only need somebody who comprehends
I only hope somebody feels the way I do
I only want this pain to leave me
I only need someone to talk to, just a friend
I only wish that somebody was you [comments] => 9 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Only Wish

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 05:35:31 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Where is my angel?
It seems she's gone away
Left me in a game I cannot play
There's nothing I can do
I can't see past your face
And I feel like I'm falling from grace

Where is she now?
I need a little guidance
And someone who understands
I don't know how
I wound up at your mercy
None of this is what I planned

I look around me
How'd I get so alone?
I remember when your heart still shone
It shouldn't feel this way
I never thought it would
And if I let go it could be good

Where did she go?
Everything's so confusing
And I feel like I'm losing
I wish I'd known
I put my heart on the line
When I left them all behind

I only want someone to hold me
I only need somebody who comprehends
I only hope somebody feels the way I do
I only want this pain to leave me
I only need someone to talk to, just a friend
I only wish that somebody was you




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2004-01-01 17:35:31]
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Re: Only Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 06:51:33 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful.. and so sad.. i hope your angel realises soon how lucky she is to have a friend like you! and i hope you're okay too..
charlotte x_x_x


Re: Only Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 07:43:55 PM AEST
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The strings to my heart were tugged hard while reading this. Incredibly sad, filled with emotion and absolutely beautiful.

Kie


Re: Only Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 08:14:55 PM AEST
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This sounds all too familiar.... sad but good writing Moonlit...


Re: Only Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 12:18:09 AM AEST
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Well said, Moonlit.... all too familiar to me too....but many moons ago....
Hugs and best wishes for a great 2004..
Jenni


Re: Only Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 12:19:55 AM AEST
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Awfully sad but well written.


Re: Only Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 10:33:51 AM AEST
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Such power and show of emotions. Incredibly good write.
'There's nothing I can do
I can't see past your face
And I feel like I'm falling from grace'
Those lines are deeply awesome.


Re: Only Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Cristi on Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 03:54:35 PM AEST
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Thats great, i think you have great potential


Re: Only Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by StarBeneathTheStairs on Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 05:05:52 AM AEST
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Very touching, well written, loved it :)


Re: Only Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 01:46:06 AM AEST
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Well written Moonlit,your last verse stated every emotion even if it wasn't written.Nicely done,
PumpkinPie




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