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Array ( [sid] => 30498 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Is this Love? [time] => 2003-12-31 15:44:14 [hometext] => Still playing! [bodytext] => It’s strange, so strange, what it does for you,
Strong men quake, the meek just quiver,
The feeling of love turns all men to goo,
You can tell if he’s in love by the way he shivers.

To him she is like a magnet drawing him in,
He has no chance, she is perfect as far as he can see,
A typical man in love with a dumb ass grin,
These are the last moments he’ll ever be free.

He don’t need a hypnotist cos he’s already under,
Whatever she wants her new man will be there,
She came into his life like some crash of thunder,
As far as he’s concerned she’s going nowhere.

All of a sudden he’s being taken home indoors,
Out comes all the Sunday plates and silver service,
Could it be he has for the first time met his in-laws?
Seems not for long does she want to stay a Miss.

It’s been months since he had a laugh and a beer,
No drinks, just shopping for new suit and tie,
Nerves set in as the magic all white day draws near,
The girls hope it’s “I do”, the lads that it’s “Not I”.

Too late he realises it’s a trap, for maybe he’s doomed,
Couldn’t wait for wedding to get her into bed,
Second thoughts, should he walk away from this soon,
The answers obvious with a shotgun at your head. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 447 [topic] => 2 [informant] => jonteD [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Is this Love?

Contributed by jonteD on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 03:44:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



It’s strange, so strange, what it does for you,
Strong men quake, the meek just quiver,
The feeling of love turns all men to goo,
You can tell if he’s in love by the way he shivers.

To him she is like a magnet drawing him in,
He has no chance, she is perfect as far as he can see,
A typical man in love with a dumb ass grin,
These are the last moments he’ll ever be free.

He don’t need a hypnotist cos he’s already under,
Whatever she wants her new man will be there,
She came into his life like some crash of thunder,
As far as he’s concerned she’s going nowhere.

All of a sudden he’s being taken home indoors,
Out comes all the Sunday plates and silver service,
Could it be he has for the first time met his in-laws?
Seems not for long does she want to stay a Miss.

It’s been months since he had a laugh and a beer,
No drinks, just shopping for new suit and tie,
Nerves set in as the magic all white day draws near,
The girls hope it’s “I do”, the lads that it’s “Not I”.

Too late he realises it’s a trap, for maybe he’s doomed,
Couldn’t wait for wedding to get her into bed,
Second thoughts, should he walk away from this soon,
The answers obvious with a shotgun at your head.




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Re: Is this Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 04:14:04 PM AEST
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Hey..you're supposed to be working...not playing!!
Jenni


Re: Is this Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 05:40:09 PM AEST
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Hahahaha
'It’s been months since he had a laugh and a beer'
Hahahaha. Great write. This was pretty true... Or at least it would ave been.


Re: Is this Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 05:50:36 PM AEST
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This was really cute to read. It made me smile and laugh a bit, I thought it was great.

Kie


Re: Is this Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 02:28:52 AM AEST
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I hear u.
Good work and definently funny.
Best year ever,
emy


Re: Is this Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 04:01:22 PM AEST
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jonteD, I thought your poem was very entertaining..... and... I'll bet those are the circumstances more often than not!
In the heart of USA, Bizzy




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