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Passing Time
Contributed by
garyh
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Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 03:32:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sun going down slowly
Faster though each time
Beautiful skies starting to show
Throughout this wonderful time
Joys of laughter, happiness and fertility
Hoping for something
Something better
Something new
Waiting for the time
The time to rejoice
Waiting for the time
The time to renounce
Copyright ©
garyh
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2003-12-31 15:32:03]
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Re: Passing Time
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 03:42:13 PM AEST
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ummmm it is good
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Re: Passing Time
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 04:33:31 PM AEST
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| seems aburpt and unfinished.... I like the second verse though... :) |
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