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[title] => You Complete Me
[time] => 2003-12-31 06:58:59
[hometext] => This is what truly lies within my heart, and means a lot to me. I had a hard time deciding to post this, but hope someone out there can appreciate it. My love letter with no address...
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You make me feel like i've never felt before
You've unlocked my heart and opened up my door
With every passing day I love you so much more
The best things in life are worth waiting for
No matter what I say or what I ever do
Never forget how deeply I love you
I read between the lines and sometimes misconstrue
But never could I deny something I feel so true
Look deep into my eyes and you'll see
That you forever will complete me
You pulled me from my dark and hate-filled shell
Emotional purgatory, my own personal hell
I owe you to no end, something I could never tell
Every moment with you is where I wish to eternally dwell
You make me feel like i've never felt before
To do you any wrong hurts me ten times more
And while life seems to be a never ending war
Knowing we'll be together always makes my spirit soar
Tears of joy run down my face when I imagine how it'll be
When the day finally comes, when you complete me
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You Complete Me
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 06:58:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You make me feel like i've never felt before
You've unlocked my heart and opened up my door
With every passing day I love you so much more
The best things in life are worth waiting for
No matter what I say or what I ever do
Never forget how deeply I love you
I read between the lines and sometimes misconstrue
But never could I deny something I feel so true
Look deep into my eyes and you'll see
That you forever will complete me
You pulled me from my dark and hate-filled shell
Emotional purgatory, my own personal hell
I owe you to no end, something I could never tell
Every moment with you is where I wish to eternally dwell
You make me feel like i've never felt before
To do you any wrong hurts me ten times more
And while life seems to be a never ending war
Knowing we'll be together always makes my spirit soar
Tears of joy run down my face when I imagine how it'll be
When the day finally comes, when you complete me
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Vitreous_Soul
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Re: You Complete Me
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 07:47:24 AM AEST
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| I definitely appreciate this. Very well written. |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 11:01:14 AM AEST
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I have read your poem about half a dozen times. I am armed with kleenex to simply comment. I found this touchingly beautiful. I could just imagine opening a card and finding these words. This is one of the top ten best poems I have ever read.
Kie |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 11:03:03 AM AEST
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| wow... |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 11:17:20 AM AEST
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An excellent write.
Love your work.
Bravo... |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by Stalkee on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 11:27:07 AM AEST
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| very beautiful poem...wow, i dont even know what to say...I've re-read this a few times and well, just wow! goood job |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by Chadene_Gillespie on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 12:46:50 PM AEST
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| this is a very touching and moving poem. good job. |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 01:51:52 PM AEST
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Wow. An absolutely fantastic poem. And oh, the last two lines . . . I'm sniffling here.
It'll come, Dan. It'll come someday.
dusk and daybreak,
Nora |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by eternal_sorrows on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 02:46:04 AM AEST
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This is absolutly gorgeous! A beautifully perfect write! i see no reason you would have hesitated posting this one!
es |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by Tanna on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 02:15:21 AM AEST
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Truely beautiful. I hope you find the address..
~T |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by CountryGirl on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:46:26 PM AEST
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| I feel this. And understand exactly where you are coming from. Thanks for sharing. It's nice to know someone else out there feels the same. |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by fallen_eyes on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 09:11:59 AM AEST
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wow. now i know why luke said your an amazing write. the words you chose are so easy to relate to, I really like this poem.
Tammy x |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:43:34 PM AEST
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Wow!! I really love this poem it reminds me so much of how I truly feel about my boyfriend.
Whoever wrote it thanks for opening my eyes, to your truly beautiful poem |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 09:13:54 AM AEST
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Dan, i dont know how i missed this but i shall repent every day for the rest of my life, dan this was perfect, except now this letter has an address, a very lucky one :)
I loved everything about this, ive already read it over and over i just cant stop im a man possessed, and your the drug lol
great write dan truely beautiful
Luke |
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