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Array ( [sid] => 30426 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ashlee's Poem [time] => 2003-12-30 14:17:49 [hometext] => I just recently gave this poem to a girl along with a red rose. I wonder what she thought about it. I thought it was kinda corney. I named it after her, obviously. Ahh, well so what if I'm a fool... [bodytext] => This world can be a crazy place
But through it all I found you
And even though I've made mistakes
I need you with me to see things through

I can't tell you everything I feel
I wouldn't know where to start
But I know my emotions are real
I can only tell you what's in my heart

No matter how things turn out to be
I will always feel the same way
And even if you refuse me
I would still think of you each day

I'm not turning back from here
I've made my final decision
I want you to know I love you dear
Even if I can't tell you in person [comments] => 7 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 2 [informant] => darien [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Ashlee's Poem

Contributed by darien on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 02:17:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



This world can be a crazy place
But through it all I found you
And even though I've made mistakes
I need you with me to see things through

I can't tell you everything I feel
I wouldn't know where to start
But I know my emotions are real
I can only tell you what's in my heart

No matter how things turn out to be
I will always feel the same way
And even if you refuse me
I would still think of you each day

I'm not turning back from here
I've made my final decision
I want you to know I love you dear
Even if I can't tell you in person




Copyright © darien ... [ 2003-12-30 14:17:49]
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Re: Ashlee's Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Elf on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 02:42:46 PM AEST
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I dont think its corney at all. In fact, I think quite the contrary. Its a good write. Very sweet. I hope all goes well with her.
-*Dixie*-


Re: Ashlee's Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 06:06:03 PM AEST
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Oh Darien,
What very touching sweet, and loving write...if she thinks it's corny...you better drop her fast....she hasn't feeling for you that will last.
This was a marvelously well written, and heartfelt poem. She should be honored, and tell you so!
lovingcritters
ConSue


Re: Ashlee's Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 06:11:38 PM AEST
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Corny!! NO WAY!! This was very beautiful... I'm sure she loved it....
Happy New Year..
Jenni


Re: Ashlee's Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Estelle_Toh on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 08:27:38 PM AEST
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How sweeeeet and romantic!

Estelle


Re: Ashlee's Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 07:57:52 AM AEST
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Definitely not corny, in fact it was pretty romantic. :)


Re: Ashlee's Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 04:47:50 PM AEST
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Thoughtful & romantic. A nice write.
Best of luck.

Kie


Re: Ashlee's Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by kori31 on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 06:49:30 PM AEST
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Hell yeah! That's beautiful!!!!!!




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