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Array ( [sid] => 30424 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a single breath-pt1 [time] => 2003-12-30 13:35:24 [hometext] => written in ignorance [bodytext] => tears fell freely, rusting, encaging the pain
your love alone, found it's way inside
the explosions giving life to an inanimate host
the heart now beats, only in anticipation of you;
when time no longer matters,
and i can stare into the depths of your eyes forever
Soul has broken all restraints,
wrapping around you, deep inside you
pulling you ever so close into me
never could have imagined a feeling so free
falling swiftly, knowing no boundaries in the strength you give me
wanting only to be in your arms, yours and yours alone
needing only the symphony of your voice to softly rock me,
on the waves, so gentle, of your love
no meaning to life
without your compaionship
no use for a soul
if i cannot share it
Everything;
A small price to pay, if only for a single breath's span in your presence [comments] => 4 [counter] => 304 [topic] => 43 [informant] => stitches [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
a single breath-pt1

Contributed by stitches on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 01:35:24 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



tears fell freely, rusting, encaging the pain
your love alone, found it's way inside
the explosions giving life to an inanimate host
the heart now beats, only in anticipation of you;
when time no longer matters,
and i can stare into the depths of your eyes forever
Soul has broken all restraints,
wrapping around you, deep inside you
pulling you ever so close into me
never could have imagined a feeling so free
falling swiftly, knowing no boundaries in the strength you give me
wanting only to be in your arms, yours and yours alone
needing only the symphony of your voice to softly rock me,
on the waves, so gentle, of your love
no meaning to life
without your compaionship
no use for a soul
if i cannot share it
Everything;
A small price to pay, if only for a single breath's span in your presence




Copyright © stitches ... [ 2003-12-30 13:35:24]
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Re: a single breath-pt1 (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 10:19:27 PM AEST
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very nice. very....giving. and what ignorance was that?

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Re: a single breath-pt1 (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 11:39:54 PM AEST
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Wow... I don't know what to say... Other than what I told my mate sitting over there with a drink in his hand 'Cheers'. I think your pretty awesome. I think you found a match Cancer.


Re: a single breath-pt1 (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 11:56:37 PM AEST
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I'm confused as to what the ignorance is as well. This was really good and very poetic. *goes to read Part II*

Bobo (Joel)


Re: a single breath-pt1 (User Rating: 1 )
by stitches on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 09:23:48 AM AEST
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maybe naievity is a better word, i said ignorance because i set myself up for a very hard fall




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