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Array ( [sid] => 30418 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Celestial Escape [time] => 2003-12-30 11:57:54 [hometext] => Here's something a little different for those of you who are familiar with my writings. [bodytext] => I close my eyes and disappear
And start to forget my deepest fear
I sometimes feel the presence of you
Knowing for certain my feelings were true
I still love you but not the same
You let everything go up in flames
I've let you go though I keep you close
My love for you you'll never know
I fall asleep and drift away
Trying to forget the pain I felt today
I fly away to a safer place
A place where pain I'll never face
Out of this world and into my own
A place where I don't feel alone
Faw away into another time
Where everything is always fine
And at this place I call you mine
Left behind are the hurt filled rhymes
At this place your love is true
No matter what we make it through
In my world there is nothing bad
We get back the love we once had
So come with me, come to this place
Drift away with me to the Celestial Escape. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 22 [informant] => CuttersAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Celestial Escape

Contributed by CuttersAngel on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 11:57:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I close my eyes and disappear
And start to forget my deepest fear
I sometimes feel the presence of you
Knowing for certain my feelings were true
I still love you but not the same
You let everything go up in flames
I've let you go though I keep you close
My love for you you'll never know
I fall asleep and drift away
Trying to forget the pain I felt today
I fly away to a safer place
A place where pain I'll never face
Out of this world and into my own
A place where I don't feel alone
Faw away into another time
Where everything is always fine
And at this place I call you mine
Left behind are the hurt filled rhymes
At this place your love is true
No matter what we make it through
In my world there is nothing bad
We get back the love we once had
So come with me, come to this place
Drift away with me to the Celestial Escape.




Copyright © CuttersAngel ... [ 2003-12-30 11:57:54]
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Re: Celestial Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 12:26:21 PM AEST
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well done my friend

michelle


Re: Celestial Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by Fudge on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 09:17:02 PM AEST
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hi CutterAngel i have read (what i think are) most of the poems you've posted and i think they are all wonderful. i like the style you write in and the words you use to express your feelings. hope to see more of your work.


Re: Celestial Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by Fudge on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 09:23:27 PM AEST
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hi CutterAngel i have read (what i think are) most of the poems you've posted and i think they are all wonderful. i like the style you write in and the words you use to express your feelings. hope to see more of your work.


Re: Celestial Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 12:14:14 AM AEST
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Damn, can I come? LOL... great write, the quality is just as good as your other stuff. Very impressive. I'm quickly becoming a fan. Keep up the good work!

~ Moonlit




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