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[aid] => mick
[title] => It's Over
[time] => 2003-12-29 21:35:35
[hometext] => I personally think this should be in the humorous section... I mean it's her own stupidity that caused her death, but *shrugs* that is just my opinion. And OF COURSE it will be outnumbered by others... so... really it's pointless stating it.
[bodytext] => "I know you, you say," as you look into my eyes. "You wouldn't do it," you challenge, "you're a fake, you lie!" I cry aloud, shaking off tears, I point the gun to your head and whisper in your ear. "You're a bad person, and soon you're gonna die. Just do me a favor- don't whine or cry." I'll show you, just you wait. "This is my revenge. This is our fate." Tears rolling off my cheek, I close my eyes. "Yes, this is what happens, when you ruin people's lives!" Your life slips, and you try to grasp it. But it's too strong and you fall gasping. I force a laugh, and hold my head high. It starts to rain and I look up at the sky. Turning to go, I wish him good luck in hell, then he shoots me in the back, and to the ground I fell. So now here I am, dead as can be. It's all your fault... I mean... you cheated on me. If you wouldn't have lied or got caught in the act, you wouldn't be in a coffin, lying on your back. But of course you did, and got me ... You're the reason our marriage ended like this. "To have and to hold 'til death do us part..." I should've just left you, right from the start. Oh well, life's a and then you die, looks like it's over, sweetie pie... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 59 [informant] => pugnaciouspixie [notes] => .....Edited by mod_6 for language...27-03-04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
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