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Array ( [sid] => 30352 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye To All My Thoughts of Love [time] => 2003-12-29 14:58:07 [hometext] => critisism is much appreciated (as always) thanks for reading [bodytext] => When am I gonna say this is love?
What are you gonna say when I do?
I should have done this so much sooner
I should have listened to all my friends
Now I know I can’t ever hold you
Now I know you won’t ever hold me
I messed up for the second time
Here I am singing this same ol’ song

Goodbye to all of my thoughts of love
Where you were always running wild
Like a pony in an open field
Now I guess I’m left broken again
I wanna forget all about you,
I wanna forget all about us
I’ve finally decided I should say…
Goodbye to all of my thoughts of love

What do you suppose I should do now?
I wonder what you are gonna do
Gonna take more than consolation
To get me back up on my two feet
Maybe you will find someone out there
Who will be everything that you want
And won’t be so hesitant to ask
If you would wanna be their girl
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 342 [topic] => 22 [informant] => stalkee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Goodbye To All My Thoughts of Love

Contributed by stalkee on Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 02:58:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



When am I gonna say this is love?
What are you gonna say when I do?
I should have done this so much sooner
I should have listened to all my friends
Now I know I can’t ever hold you
Now I know you won’t ever hold me
I messed up for the second time
Here I am singing this same ol’ song

Goodbye to all of my thoughts of love
Where you were always running wild
Like a pony in an open field
Now I guess I’m left broken again
I wanna forget all about you,
I wanna forget all about us
I’ve finally decided I should say…
Goodbye to all of my thoughts of love

What do you suppose I should do now?
I wonder what you are gonna do
Gonna take more than consolation
To get me back up on my two feet
Maybe you will find someone out there
Who will be everything that you want
And won’t be so hesitant to ask
If you would wanna be their girl




Copyright © stalkee ... [ 2003-12-29 14:58:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Goodbye To All My Thoughts of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 03:33:14 PM AEST
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this is a sad but very well expressed write.. I enjoyed reading it .. I hope you can move on.. stay strong there is always hope


JENNA


Re: Goodbye To All My Thoughts of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 05:00:13 PM AEST
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i agree with jenna
and ther is tomorrow
always tomorrow waiting for you
to open the eyes of your future
in tomorrow yes tomorrow


michelle


Re: Goodbye To All My Thoughts of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 10:02:43 PM AEST
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Wish I could offer some consolation, but words never can heal that kind of hurt. I'm sorry. Love was never intended to cause suffering.
Take care.
David Lossing


Re: Goodbye To All My Thoughts of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 04:54:58 PM AEST
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Deeply awesome... I think love at times is the cruelest thing... I hope it all gets better and everything works out in the end. Just remember if god wills it there will be water.




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