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Array ( [sid] => 30330 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => adultery [time] => 2003-12-29 09:13:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => pain
arriving in the shadows
liquid and shapeless
waiting
seeking some vulnerability
finding not but a pinhole
i am fully aware
the wolf bays at my suffering
i am cursed by Her name
sadness overwhelms
even the insane laughter
grieving
to the point of dying
sober
to the point of blame
shaking in fit of seizure
tears of blood
roll down my face
waves of anger
surging through me
my soul is cracked
ravaged, abused
the tongue waves in useless order
grasping for unspoken truth [comments] => 2 [counter] => 600 [topic] => 43 [informant] => stitches [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

adultery

Contributed by stitches on Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 09:13:54 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

pain
arriving in the shadows
liquid and shapeless
waiting
seeking some vulnerability
finding not but a pinhole
i am fully aware
the wolf bays at my suffering
i am cursed by Her name
sadness overwhelms
even the insane laughter
grieving
to the point of dying
sober
to the point of blame
shaking in fit of seizure
tears of blood
roll down my face
waves of anger
surging through me
my soul is cracked
ravaged, abused
the tongue waves in useless order
grasping for unspoken truth

Copyright © stitches ... [ 2003-12-29 09:13:54]
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Re: adultery (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 09:23:12 PM AEST
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wow I had to read this a second time to grasp the fact that u were talking about someone cheating on you. Very good emotional poem.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: adultery (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 02:33:28 PM AEST
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This dragged me in and blew me away a couple of times. Each time I have read it I find my mind words or rather reads your wording slightly differently... It was like being cheated on... Lol. Incredible write.

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