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Contagious

Contributed by Cobalt on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:02:58 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Your softests lips
and gentlest hands
lead me to my sin.
Lay you down
our lips embrace
and stars weep.
Never could have
have enough to satisfy.
Pull me in and
deeply come to you.
Whenever we have
started we have
never let it go.
Nails in my back
they deeply tantalize.
My hands have
gone again to
explore your body.
All over us
candle light kisses.
Heaven dies and
gently weeps
each time we
come as one.


The book of the faulty phoenix




Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2003-12-28 13:02:58]
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Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:04:43 PM AEST
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I think its writing like this that leads to sin. I love it
Christina


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:09:50 PM AEST
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must go jump in snow bank to cool off - hot stuff for a winter afternoon

nicely done

merry


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:10:03 PM AEST
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Are you dating again ? hehehe.....sounds gooooooooooooood.....have fun hehehe.....sandy and the poem was great....


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:43:00 PM AEST
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woaaaaaaa.....sounds like you had a good time =) great write!


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 02:00:17 PM AEST
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Aha Paul.... This was refreshing!!! Great write..
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 02:33:20 PM AEST
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Breathtakingly beautiful, softly erotic, wow!! excellent write!


Larry


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 07:31:28 PM AEST
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i like it... ;)


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 08:09:06 PM AEST
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This is just a lovely poem, and so romantic. It's normal...nothing wrong wih that...but when one can put it into words...that's exquisite dellight!
I love the part where you said "Heaven dies and gently weeps...pretty deep!
Loved it.
ConSue


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 08:10:51 PM AEST
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This was beautiful one of your best surely. I must ask a few questions where did u find this girl and does she have a younger sister? This was brilliant.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by Candi on Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 10:47:39 PM AEST
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this poem has passion dripping from every word! great write. i will absolutely be reading more of your work.

candi


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 12:16:56 AM AEST
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they deeply tantalize.......my my...yes!!!!


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 12:56:33 AM AEST
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"Heaven dies and gently weeps
each time we come as one"...
mmm..that is poetry...welldone :)
venkat


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:11:31 AM AEST
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That's SO sweet and beautiful... stop it, you're putting thoughts in my head again!! :P Great write, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Very, very thoroughly. Hehe.

~ Moonlit


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 01:49:33 PM AEST
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let me just add to the long list of props
excellent


michelle


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by jme on Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 05:24:14 PM AEST
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You are very talented. Beautifully written.


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 12:26:58 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful write.. I enjoyed this alot.. Props to ya ... I like your style of writing

peace

JENNA


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 07:01:14 AM AEST
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Only have one thing to say about this poem, absolutley breathtakingly beautiful.
Love Dawny x


Re: Contagious (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:02:04 PM AEST
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i need to go see my boyfriend now!..lol i loved the poem,very romantic^_^
luv always




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