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Array ( [sid] => 30241 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When two forces unite [time] => 2003-12-27 13:54:18 [hometext] => WITH LOVING CRITTERS------THIS ONE EVERYONE MUST READ, WE ARE ALL GOING INTO THE NEW YEAR AS ONE FORCE! [bodytext] => When two great forces meet,
and imaginations spark....
Lives will change, when we speak our minds,
you just wait and see...
how beautiful the power of words can be...

Why would two imaginations
want to join their kinds?
Marvelous are our minds.....
Created fine, with intricacy.
Melted together, refined poetry!


Grown stale from the everyday,
From generation to the next.....
We express only through words.
As we step into yet another year,
We are stronger than before.
Our ideas are growing bigger,
There is so much to live for!

Yet, we must surmise this.
Bigger we appear, but miss.
Love, faith, goodness, and kindness,
Replaced with purse strings fineness
Lovers of themselves, Lovers of money,
but not one another.
Are we headed in the right direction?
Love for all mankind, with affection?

It's time to turn things around.
We are the race,
who can (must) speed up the pace..
to turn this dimension back, into a loving peaceful place.
Two forces alone, are not nearly enough...
Let us all come together: no need for confusion
Let us all unite as one, start a revolution...

A revolution....more conquests, more blood
Man's abuse to man leaves no lifeblood.
Should we not call on a higher power, and make demands?
Peaceful conditions for all man in all lands?


Words so strong, my dear, dear friend....
what you speak of is not unheard.
Man alone can not start this transformation.
To summon a higher power?
A life force, a God??

I truly believe, He is our only hope.
In darkness man has had to grope.
Failure after failure for thousands of years
Historians denote...man will destroy man
without help, more tears, more fears!
Where is this all going to end?
Can you tell me that, my friend?



There is no answer, to tell the truth.
We all just have to keep faith.
The ones of pure heart, will be saved in the end...
the others,
will someday get theirs...
everyone gets what they deserve.

And to that my dear friend," Amen!"
Greatest Timekeeper, tend.
He doesn't wait on me or you.
We must wait on him, 'til the end.
And see it through!


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When two forces unite

Contributed by broken-glass on Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 01:54:18 PM in AEST
Topic: group



When two great forces meet,
and imaginations spark....
Lives will change, when we speak our minds,
you just wait and see...
how beautiful the power of words can be...

Why would two imaginations
want to join their kinds?
Marvelous are our minds.....
Created fine, with intricacy.
Melted together, refined poetry!


Grown stale from the everyday,
From generation to the next.....
We express only through words.
As we step into yet another year,
We are stronger than before.
Our ideas are growing bigger,
There is so much to live for!

Yet, we must surmise this.
Bigger we appear, but miss.
Love, faith, goodness, and kindness,
Replaced with purse strings fineness
Lovers of themselves, Lovers of money,
but not one another.
Are we headed in the right direction?
Love for all mankind, with affection?

It's time to turn things around.
We are the race,
who can (must) speed up the pace..
to turn this dimension back, into a loving peaceful place.
Two forces alone, are not nearly enough...
Let us all come together: no need for confusion
Let us all unite as one, start a revolution...

A revolution....more conquests, more blood
Man's abuse to man leaves no lifeblood.
Should we not call on a higher power, and make demands?
Peaceful conditions for all man in all lands?


Words so strong, my dear, dear friend....
what you speak of is not unheard.
Man alone can not start this transformation.
To summon a higher power?
A life force, a God??

I truly believe, He is our only hope.
In darkness man has had to grope.
Failure after failure for thousands of years
Historians denote...man will destroy man
without help, more tears, more fears!
Where is this all going to end?
Can you tell me that, my friend?



There is no answer, to tell the truth.
We all just have to keep faith.
The ones of pure heart, will be saved in the end...
the others,
will someday get theirs...
everyone gets what they deserve.

And to that my dear friend," Amen!"
Greatest Timekeeper, tend.
He doesn't wait on me or you.
We must wait on him, 'til the end.
And see it through!






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Re: When two forces unite (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 02:37:44 PM AEST
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this is great and a new hope for a new year. I do believe that if enough people cme together we could make a difference.
Michelle


Re: When two forces unite (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 04:06:50 PM AEST
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Great write....true..
Jenni


Re: When two forces unite (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 04:19:53 PM AEST
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As we say out here in Wyoming Way....grab yourself a partner....it's the big square dance hoodoo....where two poets get together, and write a poem...swing your partner...round you go..you'll love it ,go with the flow. BG and I had so much fun...everyone get yourself a poet partner....and square dance out on the YPDC floor! We'll love reading them, and you'll adore...Try it, it's lots of fun!
My compliments to my partner BG....a "thinker" is he...he made me think too..
My compliments, BG a great poet are you!
Lovingcritters
ConSue


Re: When two forces unite (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 05:29:44 PM AEST
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well done wonderful write...so much truth
Shari


Re: When two forces unite (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 06:58:18 AM AEST
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Good sentiment.

I've been observing the change in mankind for about 70 years(since i was no longer a child) and there has been a lot more improvement than many people think.

I'm going to write a poem about. May take a day or two. It's a big subject.

Thanks for getting me going. Loving Critters has got you well summed up.

bob


Re: When two forces unite (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 12:13:21 PM AEST
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Wow, Amazing!!I love both u and loving critters.u are both marvelous writers,keep it up u little stars!!Great write.Amanda xx




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